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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well either you've live this life or you have witness it up close and personal! Because this is alomost exactly what happens. However, if This youkai that Inuyasha is screwing ends up pregnant...I'll shit! Because that would be a disaster in the making. Kagome did the logical thing!!! Inuyasha is a fool. Hell I wish Sesshoumaru could fall into the picture!! U know the future Sesshoumaru!! Now that would be an ass kicker for Inuyasha!!
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As much as Inu hates that Kags cheated on him and as much as Shiori is justifying the relationship for what Kags did. What Inu is doing is ten times worse then anything kagome did even if she did get pregnant.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is twisted. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Excellent chapter. I feel so bad for Inu Yasha now, but I still have to wonder if he knows that Kagome saw him and Shiori together in the woods. Sure, imagining that Kagome and Kouga were screwing was bad, but seeing the actual act seems a lot worse in my opinion. I loved the way you had Sango stand up for Kagome, though I can see that it isn't Shiori's fault. But, as he continues to sleep with Shiori, it seems that what he is doing is a whole lot worse than what Kagome did. Yes, she cheated first, but it was only one time. He keeps going back and Kaede is right; Inu Yasha is playing with Shiori. Will they work things out? I am curious as to see if you work out some sort of reconciliation. I would love to see Ginta confront Inu Yasha and tell him about the conversation between him and Kagome. However, I will love whatever you do. I am eagerly awaiting for the next update.
Now, its question time.
1) Will Kouga ever forgive Kagome. I know that he is majorly pissed and he has every right to be.
2) Does Sesshomaru know that Inu Yasha is carrying on with Shiori. After all, he was up in Inu Yasha's and Kagome's business, so I have to wonder.
3) I gotta wonder what Shiori will do when she finds out that her lover is thinking of his mate.
4) What in the world is Naraku going to do about his mate?
Well, that is about it. I hope that I am not bugging you, but this is a favorite story of mine and I just love how you have put everything together.
Waiting patiently(though failing miserably)
KogasAngel
Now, its question time.
1) Will Kouga ever forgive Kagome. I know that he is majorly pissed and he has every right to be.
2) Does Sesshomaru know that Inu Yasha is carrying on with Shiori. After all, he was up in Inu Yasha's and Kagome's business, so I have to wonder.
3) I gotta wonder what Shiori will do when she finds out that her lover is thinking of his mate.
4) What in the world is Naraku going to do about his mate?
Well, that is about it. I hope that I am not bugging you, but this is a favorite story of mine and I just love how you have put everything together.
Waiting patiently(though failing miserably)
KogasAngel
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good. Well worth the wait. I wonder how everything will work out. What ever happanned with Kouga and Kagome?
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Awesome plot... I love your story, please update!
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya i hate cliff hangers soo you already know what i am gonna say sooo UPDATE YOUR STORY SOON I WANT TO READ READ MORE!! LOL
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that first chapter was so sad. I can't blame Inuyasha for being pissed. Keep this up! I know I've only read chapter one but I like what i have read so far.
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KogasAngel,
LOL...you rock! Thanks for that long review, don't feel bad, I ramble as well. Yes, I am currently working on the next chapter, YES IY did sleep with Shiori a second time, yeah it was wrong but I can feel where hes comming from...lol No but really, thanks, all these reviews encourage me to write the next chapter.......the reason why it takes me a while is because I want it to be just right!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I was sure that I reviewed before. When I first read the story, I really did not like it that Kagome cheated, however, you have evolved the story to a point where I am dying for the next chapter to come out. Now, some points I would like to ask, if you don't mind...Naraku said in the last chapter(Where Kouga told Kagome off)that he knew that Shiori and IY were rutting, so does that mean that they had been intimate before or was he being paranoid. I know they slept together in this chapter, but if he is continuing to sleep with Shiori, then doesn't that make what he is doing a bit more severe than Kagome's one time fling with Kouga?
I am surprised that IY did not pick up that Kagome was there, but then again, if I were in the act, I would not notice anything either. LOL
Ginta shocked the heck out of me...I would think that he would be on Kouga's side, but instead, he comforted Kagome, and gave her some really good advice. Sesshomaru was also surprising, I would have thought that he would have let Kagome kill herself, but then again, he probably knows what IY and Shiori is doing and is now letting things go as they are.
I am glad that Kagome went back to her own time. I think(just a random thought)that she should stay in her time for a while, and let herself heal from everything. The thoughts about her dead(sorry to be so crass about it)pup is probably eating at her, and she should see that she needs to reevaluate her lifestyle. I know that Kouga is very upset, but when Kagome does come back, I would like to see them talk about everything, lay it all out. The guilt Kagome is going through is expected, but I do hope that once things settle, IY will see that in his own way, he too wronged Kagome and that they will be mates until they die(at least that is how the term mates was explained to me, so I just go with it).
I'm sorry for rambling, but this is the kind of story that worms its way into your mind and won't let go until the very end. I think that it is wonderful and hope that you have the next chapter out soon.
I am surprised that IY did not pick up that Kagome was there, but then again, if I were in the act, I would not notice anything either. LOL
Ginta shocked the heck out of me...I would think that he would be on Kouga's side, but instead, he comforted Kagome, and gave her some really good advice. Sesshomaru was also surprising, I would have thought that he would have let Kagome kill herself, but then again, he probably knows what IY and Shiori is doing and is now letting things go as they are.
I am glad that Kagome went back to her own time. I think(just a random thought)that she should stay in her time for a while, and let herself heal from everything. The thoughts about her dead(sorry to be so crass about it)pup is probably eating at her, and she should see that she needs to reevaluate her lifestyle. I know that Kouga is very upset, but when Kagome does come back, I would like to see them talk about everything, lay it all out. The guilt Kagome is going through is expected, but I do hope that once things settle, IY will see that in his own way, he too wronged Kagome and that they will be mates until they die(at least that is how the term mates was explained to me, so I just go with it).
I'm sorry for rambling, but this is the kind of story that worms its way into your mind and won't let go until the very end. I think that it is wonderful and hope that you have the next chapter out soon.