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OOOOOOOOOOOOO YES DO THAT!!!! It'll make inu jealious!!!!!UPDATE!!!

Keep it up! It's getting pretty interesting! ^_^

I really like your story. It has potential. Is Inu Yasha going to be hall demon disguised in his human form? If you skim over "When he was Mine" by maggz if might give you some ideas on your fic. It has a similar storyline and is a really good story.

Kikyo is such a bitch I hope that you make her suffer (I'm a total Kikyo bashing fan) I can't wait untill the next chapter update soon please.

Hey no worries girly!!!!! u rock i seriously love ur story. If u have ever read my stories u notice mistakes too, so dont worry about it. If u have the heart and courage to put up ur story, and ur giving ur all, then GOOD FOR U!!!!UR STORY ROCKS BABY!!!AND DONT LISTEN TO EVERYONE!!!! Take the good and the bad comments, but dont let it stop u from writing. Update soon!!!!^_^

Aye aye aye...now I'm confused...did you go back in time or something? Because the way I thought it went was that Inuyasha was Kagome's first..but Kikyo 'stole' him...did he go with Kikyo then Kagome and then back to Kagome? Or did he just forget about Kagome all together? @.@ I'm confuuuused lol Other than that, you're doing a nice job! The speach is a lot better and easier to read now. ^-^ grammar is better too. Ganbatte ne~

Snoe

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY. CAN'T WAIT INTIL YOU UPDATE!

Lmao!! bwahahaha, that's the greatest thing I ever heard. My friend introduced me to that song actually, which is why I read it ^^ Cuz I was curious. But now that it sounds soo good, I like it even more. The only thing you need to work on is your structure, spelling and grammar. Such as your speach n' stuff. Whenever someone says something, you generally put them in a new paragraph [unless in certain cases] I'd be more than happy to help you out if you need any.

But anyways, this is really interesting, please continue!! I can't wait for the new chapter to come out! You're killin me >.< Ja ne~

Snoe