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for Jolene

by Schorrdifferent

schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the comedy in this and i hope you update soon!!! this fic is amazing!
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Dee Dee
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I hope you update soon cause I can't wait to find out what happens next!! PLEASE HURRY!!!!
person aaaaa
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm well i wont flame you because uv got good writting... but im a kouga hater hes such an ass lol how could you match him with kagome! ... oh well like i said you writting isnt bad so i think ill watch this story for an upcoming chapter
person Chokoreto
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG HAHAHAS OMG AWSOME STORY! I LOVE IT! UPDATE WOMAN! I WANT TO SEE THAT SHOCKING FACE OF KIKYO! i cant believe INUYASHA would that RIGHT away.....sweet though ahahhas =DD UPDATE UPDATE!
person TricksterGoddess
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well this story is good so far, except for some spelling errors, but I'll get over that. I was thinking if you still have writers block for this story you could have kagome go to the bathroom, and so out of it that when she came out she thought she was dancing with kouga again but have it be Inu Yasha, and then Kikyo and Kagome can get into a fight and then have Inu Yasha be Kagome's secret lover or something, idk, it was a random thought... well keep up the good work, and Kagome as a football player, that would be interesting hope to read the next chapter soon, and hopefully a longer one^__^!!!
person Little Jack 2
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story continues to rock keep up the good work and update soon please.
person sky
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story plz plz update soon!!
person pot head
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. I like the idea of Koga making Kagome go on a date with him. So like is Inuyasha and kikyo going to be there? Is he gonna get mad?? Can't wait to find out. Udate
person REadER
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOooooh, I like this story a lot. That last chapter was sooo funny. Is Inu-Yasha going to keep making moves on her while he's still dating? I hope Kagome gets mad at him or goes "play hard to get" so he could suffer, BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA.