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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue
i really want to know what happens
i really want to know what happens
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Please update soon.
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm a writer here on aff.net...I'm just not logged in right now. So far I think your story is good, I'm a big fan of Sesshy/Kag fics! Please continue writing!!! Update soon!!!!!!! *hugs*
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the ideas you've based your story on. It's very original and made for an interesting read. The only complaint I have is that you need a beta-reader to catch all of the spelling and grammar errors that were all over the chapters. The title of chapter five even had the word "questions" spelled incorrectly. Look around this site for a beta-reader to help you out. I won't be able to do so this time around, but I'm sure that somebody on here will.
Anywho, very interesting story!
Anywho, very interesting story!
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September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohh i like ur intro to the characters. it was really well written and so was the intro too, a bit short but good. i did notice a few spelling and gramatical errors here and there but it's just a little. well i look forward to the rest of ur story.
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good story going on here. Things really picked up in chapter 4.. I loves it! HEHEHE Keep up the great work and i really hope to hear more from you soon! Time to goto school! hehehe
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Could use a run through spell checker, but otherwise ok. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the story. Sounds like its going to kick ass..^_^ I'm gonna keep my eye on this. Until next time! ^_^