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person Eye of Ra
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah! evil cliffy is right!! O_O

but you DID write something. ^^ so that is good. and it SO sucks that you got sick. WAY not cool. you are feeling better, right?? cause im glad you are then.. and if you arent.. then i hope you will soon. ^__^
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh a cliffy!! Its good to see you are keeping Naraku very sexy and hot..yet with some feeling also.
0,0’ Patiently waiting for an update
person Atropa
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, you updated...
Stomach-flu?? Sounds like a really nasty thing... Hope you are feeling better now.
A good chapter it was... and I will looking forward to see more from you soon.
person whirleeq
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS. WOW. So very cool... of course, I think Naraku is sexy as all hell. With my tastes in men, no wonder why my parents never liked any of my boyfriends LOL. Really great job -- there are a few spelling errors here and there, but over all it's really good and very hot! Keep going!
--julie
person Tom
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm...
person Atropa
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oyeah... sitting here and enjoy your good story..

Hope you'll update soon.
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_~I would melt under his gaze too!! Ohh a hot sexy horny Naraku!! 0,0’
Love it!! Please keep going…
person Tom
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv dis story! i think it is a great idea and u should keep up teh excellent work! This is a very extrodanary pairing and i just luv extrodinary pairings! ur a great writter and i can't wait to read more of ur stories! i also luv ur other one that includes the pairings sango/sess.....hehehehe ur my new best friend!!!

-broken dreams
person kinky lurker
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay... so i've been out of it a little while, ne? that means i've missed on all the updates... and here i asked for more!

he, he (sheepishly rubbing back of head) well, you know. i've done everything i could to find something aside from slight spelling errors to tell you about... and the only problem i found with your story was the speed it was written in. its a hurried story, ne? i can tell from the quick pace of the story and the shortness of the chapters. regardless, it's a wonderful story and i love the hentai promises!

update soon, ne? i'll try to be better on checking in.

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf