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for The Fading Night

by DanceswithElvis

person scherezade
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo!
I feel like howling my grief to the gods! After all this time...after all the suffering, the carnage, the pain...Inu and Kag are ripped apart? After all barriers (mainly Kikyou) are gone...they still can't be together? My mind..no, my poor Inu-Kag loving heart, can't accept this! Please say it ain't so!

You did an awesome job with the fighting scenes...enough description for me to picture a grimy, bloody showdown between Naraku and our good guys. And what a way to redeem Kikyou - a kiss to return a soul - wow!

But you do have me puzzled about the wish...unless I missed it somewhere...

And please, please tell me that Inu-Kag will be reunited in the end. I anxiously await the update...
person Midnight_Sparrow
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful work so far.