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I LOVED UR STORY I LOVE READING AU INUYASHA STORIES AND U ARE A GREAT WRITER PLEASE REVIEW SOON I WILL BE WAITING WITH GREAT ANTICIPATION!!!!!






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cute. where's the action though? you have style I want to keep reading and I will (as long as you keep posting) just throw some real jeolousy or conflict in there. I am looking foward to finding out Inuyashas' past. so keep it up please. thanx for your effort.

you have a very well developed plot along with great definition to your characters. its a good fic, i like it. good job so far with it. take your time with it though, i noticed your note about losing readers, don't worry about that. when you push your plot for others, you can lose something to it. just keep writing the way you want to! i love the part of the ground round, i used ot have one of dem by my house but it went bye bye a long time ago. ::sigh:: i miss that place...well...at least i used to like it when i was like, ten, so i guess it doens't count now but still...how nastalgic. very good fic, keep it up.

hope you get your reviewers back! i gotta be honest, the chapters are a little boring. maybe if you made them longer and included more conversation and less dry scenery?

Cool so far and yes I agree that "hot and heavy" may be to soon but maybe a small smootch between couples isn't mmm

hopefully when the next chapter is done, there wont be much left for the imagination!! *wink*wink* update SOOON!

oh, naughty last line!! i loved it!!

YAY!!! Another chapter (^_^) and finally they run into eachother!!!! UPDATE SOOON!!

kags should come out in a sexy outfit and inu should be there!!! haha!!! that'd teach him to appreciate clothes shopping. miroku was a little OOC b/c i mean, come on, miroku adverse to being allowed to look at kagome's body?? come on. but the porn thing was hysterical and totally on cue! loved it!

yay! another chapter!!! update soooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnn!!!! love your work!!