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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heavans, you've been busy. Praricularly liked that last one.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chap 2, I thought was fitting
chap 3 was really good, and well worded, it fit him to a T
chap 3 was really good, and well worded, it fit him to a T
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
3, was very sad but sweet!
4-was good too
5-naraku LMAO it was funny as hell, and you have knack for taking this that if not written well would make some readers mad
so be happy that you write so well!
4-was good too
5-naraku LMAO it was funny as hell, and you have knack for taking this that if not written well would make some readers mad
so be happy that you write so well!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my last review move all the numbers down 1
no 8 was funny with sess and inu LOL
10- bad bad bad shippo, and i don't blame inu I'd be jealous too LOL I like shippo
no 8 was funny with sess and inu LOL
10- bad bad bad shippo, and i don't blame inu I'd be jealous too LOL I like shippo
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
11- Jaken! lol but I can see it! maybe thats the real reason he hates rin
12-that was inuyasha right? and rin? well at least she wasn't bitter about it lol
13-ohhhh naughty friends but very well done, was like a touch of poetry
12-that was inuyasha right? and rin? well at least she wasn't bitter about it lol
13-ohhhh naughty friends but very well done, was like a touch of poetry
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute I like to see kikyo in a softer light and pre naraku
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, cute. *sniff*
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my indeed....sheesh. much darker then the others. i liked it alot.
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::shriek of horror:: OH MY GOD! not sippou! anyone but sweet innocent angelic shippou! A PERV?!?!??!?!?!?
god, you a bent mind. it's great!!
god, you a bent mind. it's great!!
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very dramatic! prose like, if you know what i mean. will there be any bankotsu/jankotsu action? i'd love that!