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for Beneath the Skin

by szmadad

schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo, perfect, simply wonderful. its always good to read something different from the same old bullshit about inu&kag, and even better when the story has quality! congrats for you two :D PLEEEEASE UPDATE FAST, i can NOT wait any fucking second anymore...... duh kisses ;**
person kagss
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I was so lost in the story, let me tell you, it's really sexy and sweet, just loved it... i hope ypu two work fast for the rest of the story, what's gonna hapen next, what's whit kikyo and inuyasha... i know the story it's just beginin, but god knows it's so well writen, and it has the best amount of elements to captivate the readers...YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!!! PLEEESE!!!
person Urgazhi
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woa, that is one intense story so far, i love it :)

Please continue it :) its just great!
person ladyireland
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! I just found you 2 and it's freakin amazing!
person BirdieBlythe
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story...and I'm not really confused...which slightly bothered me. Can you answer for me why you strted it out like that? No background on why they ended up THAT way. R u going to bring it in as a flashback? Oh and I LOVE the slight kikyou bashing! I hate that cold bitch!
person Twilight
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhh this story is really really really good ooo plezzzzzzz yall have to write more
person Ash
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowies. I just finished what you 2 have got so far and I'm craving another chapter already. ^_^ I shall now sit and -try- to wait patiently for the next update. Keep it up!! x)
person laura
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good so far can't wait for more!!
person cukid9
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg, that first chapter was excellent! Talk about pulling the reading into the story! What better way than having it all hot and heavy from the very beginning? There are soooo many Inuyasha stories out there and sometimes you have to wade through them to find the really good ones...and this is a really good one. I hope you update this sometime in the near future (I'm not going to beg...okay...a little begging...please update? ^_^)
person aleaha
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OI OI OI, I hope that this one isn't abandoned I really really don't, cause its too damn good to be left with only two chapters...I hope to see an update soon, ooh and I loved the one shots too.