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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*laughs*
Me stopped reading when I got to the 13 inch dick part. AAAHHHAAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! 13 inches!? 13 inches my ass. What did Shippo do... take some freaking growth hormones? LOL 13 inches god chick you are one funny little shit. Ahem... Okay let me say that in a different way... Me's not trying to be rude but I just couldn't help but laugh as I read the 13 inch part. Do you know how long 13 inches are? Think of thoses rulers that are used in elementary school. Ya know the 12 inch ones? Yeah now add one more inch.
Huh?
You get me now? Do ya? I don't think a female could handle that buuuuttt what do I know... maybe it is possible but hell I don't think there is any male that is that long. Shit, I'd think that any chick would turn tail and run for the hills if they saw something like that. Than again,
Maybe they'd stay.
O___o;;;
Me stopped reading when I got to the 13 inch dick part. AAAHHHAAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! 13 inches!? 13 inches my ass. What did Shippo do... take some freaking growth hormones? LOL 13 inches god chick you are one funny little shit. Ahem... Okay let me say that in a different way... Me's not trying to be rude but I just couldn't help but laugh as I read the 13 inch part. Do you know how long 13 inches are? Think of thoses rulers that are used in elementary school. Ya know the 12 inch ones? Yeah now add one more inch.
Huh?
You get me now? Do ya? I don't think a female could handle that buuuuttt what do I know... maybe it is possible but hell I don't think there is any male that is that long. Shit, I'd think that any chick would turn tail and run for the hills if they saw something like that. Than again,
Maybe they'd stay.
O___o;;;
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*I thought I'd pretend I was one of those deaf mutes.*
For the first time, I have read this story and had no complaints about the storyline. My only complaint is the lack of details as far as sex goes. You were not able to really express your (Shippo's) feelings, and his atttraction. Otherwise, a terrific job from a wonderufl up and coming writer.
*I thought I'd pretend I was one of those deaf mutes.*
For the first time, I have read this story and had no complaints about the storyline. My only complaint is the lack of details as far as sex goes. You were not able to really express your (Shippo's) feelings, and his atttraction. Otherwise, a terrific job from a wonderufl up and coming writer.
*I thought I'd pretend I was one of those deaf mutes.*
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good response to the challenge!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this was really good its alot better than most of the other shippo stories and its just good in general.you should really write some sort of sequel or just another shippo story, if you do you should have him in demon form again and maybe there could be a kirara scene.
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic, the rest of the shippo stories suck.
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great you should write a sequel or something
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm pretty sure he's not and very nice(13?!?!? )
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u didn't sound like ur going to but u should write a sequel or new chapter