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for Divine

by Silvershine

schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
although this is as often as not a comedy with romantic touches, I am certainly not complaining, for this story is absolutely great!! I cannot wait until you update this story especially as there still quite a few issues to be resolved especially the one with Sango!!
person passer by
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
way to leave us hanging! Update some time why don't ya? ~_^
person Meres
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, come on! You surface long enough to upload the existing 13 chapters here and there's no 14 to come with it? You make me sad.

This gives me hope that you haven't abandoned this fic! We know you're still alive now and we're pining away . . .
person Jordy
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, the kagura cutting naraku's toenails is probably one of the funniest things i've ever read! especially since they think he's plotting against them! oh, and btw how in the world does mr. Houshi-sama know about viagra ;) lol ... please update soon!
person thebigW
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I'm giving you a review, AND a five plus thingie rating! This fic was great on ffn (dolts!) and here you won't be hamstrung. It's so conflicting. I wan't more, but I also wan't outstanding, so I guess I won't rush you for the next chapter (chews fingernails). In about a month, when everyone finds out where this story is, you'll have about 35 million hits or so, this is SO good.
Go on and do that thing you do...
W.
person Amarra
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it really much till now, you are a good writer and the story is funny, but one thing really made me frown upon it. don't be mad it's just one little but important thing... Kagome says. “I’m going to sleep – and if you try anything again then I’ll sit you so hard that you won’t be able to try anything for a year!”

well, she said Sit here... but there is nothing heard about Inuyasha being flat to the ground in the next line. And when Kagome says sit, he ends up eating dirt no matter what or when. *shrugs* well.

person vashta
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad this story has been updated. I was following it on Mediaminer, but mm is so out of whack lately I missed it. Is Kag going to continue being such a prude, they have already done it, she is being very unfair in withholding from him. Nookie in the next chap. please!!!!!!!!!!!
person ME
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please!! Oh please!! Update soon!!!! I've been reading this story since....forever!!! ^_^ and I'm so hoping you'll give us a new chapter soon!! This is the absolute best !! and you've left off at a great spot---will Inu ever get any nookie again???!!! Consider it all very long, drawn out foreplay!!! I'm mean--give the guy a break already!! he hasn't gotten any since, what??, chapter 8?? ^_^ This is so very funny and hot, all at the same time!! Keep up the great work--look forward to ch 14....15....16....++++++++ ....soon????????????????????????????????????????????????????? please????????????????????
person catt
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! HAHAHAHA "Little?" heheh love it, great story, great chappies. Can't wait until the next one. Update soon!!!!
person HoushiLover
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
h-i-l-a-r-i-o-u-s. Can't wait for the next chapter!