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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! The detail was amazing, like no other! Keep writing!
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Very steamy! It had great detail and it was well thought out. Great job one of the best lemons I've read in awhile. Write Another story please or continue this one but sometimes other chapters one such a whole story can be dissappointing. Though I highly doubt yours would be. Keep up the great work and again wow!!
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice!!! steaming hot but tasteful! well done indeed!!
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it!
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best lemons I've ever read. It's beautiful and passionate, with great vocabulary and grammar. You put so much detail into the descriptions. In some stories, the lemon scenes seem rushed, and a story like yours is always a welcome relief from that. I also love that Inuyasha made sure Kagome knew she didn't have to do anything she didn't want to, and Miroku (without words) did the same for Sango.
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow THAT ROCKED!!! Really hot, and I can picture inu and kag doing that. Hhehehe. Awesome. I hope to see more from u. ^_^
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! What a story!!! Hope you give it another chapter or two!!!
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great.i want more. have some plots would make the story better and of couse more LEMONS!!!