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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there.....
well i have to say that i have been following your story for quite some time now, being a loyal Inuyasha fan, and i have to say that this is one of the most captivating stories that i have read. I love the way that you combine the anxiety in a situation and mix it up by giving the readers a glipse into the characters heads! its fantastic!
I love the way that there is actually a storyline to it and the twists and turns to it are mind blowing! i never suspected that yamamoto was evil!!!!!! geez that was a doozy! i also love the way that you have defined that cahracters in the story, they are deep, with conflicting emotions, it brings them to life. I think that my best part though is the simple descriptions you give to things, your use of vocabulary clearly states that you are very articulate and your wide range of descriptions brings the story into a whole new light...i can almost see it taking place!!!! great stuff!!!!!!!
The lemony goodness was also there... i even blushed a few times with different situatiuons between Inuyasha and kagome...very origional! Keep it up! the only bad criticism i can offer at this point is that this may be turning into a more Sess and Rin story... the other characters are there but in the background!
on a more personal note.... i hope that rin ans Sess eventually get to "do it".(^^,) gracious bush forming on my cheeks now!
Other than that keep up the awesome work!!!!!!!!! you rock and i cant wait for the next instalment! Wohooooo!!!!
Thanx!
well i have to say that i have been following your story for quite some time now, being a loyal Inuyasha fan, and i have to say that this is one of the most captivating stories that i have read. I love the way that you combine the anxiety in a situation and mix it up by giving the readers a glipse into the characters heads! its fantastic!
I love the way that there is actually a storyline to it and the twists and turns to it are mind blowing! i never suspected that yamamoto was evil!!!!!! geez that was a doozy! i also love the way that you have defined that cahracters in the story, they are deep, with conflicting emotions, it brings them to life. I think that my best part though is the simple descriptions you give to things, your use of vocabulary clearly states that you are very articulate and your wide range of descriptions brings the story into a whole new light...i can almost see it taking place!!!! great stuff!!!!!!!
The lemony goodness was also there... i even blushed a few times with different situatiuons between Inuyasha and kagome...very origional! Keep it up! the only bad criticism i can offer at this point is that this may be turning into a more Sess and Rin story... the other characters are there but in the background!
on a more personal note.... i hope that rin ans Sess eventually get to "do it".(^^,) gracious bush forming on my cheeks now!
Other than that keep up the awesome work!!!!!!!!! you rock and i cant wait for the next instalment! Wohooooo!!!!
Thanx!
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! They have Rin! Poor Sess. LOL, Sess with a gun on Ryen. OMG! Hiten and Bank in the conspiracy. Bastards. I got hand it to Rin. She has guts. Oh yeah, finally some action. Hope we have some of those hot lemons before all of this is over. Great chappie.
Snowfall
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah, he had to go ;) good chapter!
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... talk about something! That was an awesome chapter and I DONT WANT IT TO END!!!! *cries* But I guess, all good things must come to an end. Keep up the good work and I can not wait for the next chapter! I loved the whole singing bit, if only guys knew how much that shit meant to us... lol.
Kittenn
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::gasp!:: omg!! Rin.. Rin LIED!! how could she!?.. i can feel how InuYasha would be mad at her.... :P anyway, update soon!! i gotta know what happens next!!... no!! only a few more chapters to go!! i NEVER want this to end!!.. maybe.. you could do a sequel?? PLEASE!!?? :3
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO, you must not be done with the story i love your story!!!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
5 chapters left? how are you going to finish this in 5 chapters?? no way! rin's totally messed up! !!!!! update soon!! where's rin????????
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... i really dont know what to say.. i think, that this is one of the best chapters i have read!! i just loved everything! a lot more things were uncovered... i just really hope that you update soon!! x] i can't wait until the next chapter is up! update soon please!!! :D
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmm dante...
damnit! rin is never gonna be sane. no way. you just cant come back from that. people get locked up in the nut house for less. ugh! poor sess! poor rin! :(
damnit! rin is never gonna be sane. no way. you just cant come back from that. people get locked up in the nut house for less. ugh! poor sess! poor rin! :(
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! omg.. i have to say that this was a funny chapter!! especially when inuyasha was scared of heights, but wouldn't admit it.. that was hilarious!! wow.. everyone else actually did IT.. except for InuYasha.. wow.. what a change huh?.. lol.. great chapter! update soon please!! ^^