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for Curse of the Dragon

by fallenangel7583

person fluffysgirl802005
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
having ryen being their uncle was cool.
having him being in love with kagome's mom, cool
still haven't finished what you have written, it'll probably take me a week to finish it.
but i am so enjoying it.

person fluffysgirl802005
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, i just finished chapter 34.. and i am constantly blown away in every chapter.

i've figured out that detective onuni is of course their father, spelled backwards. hiding his scent, calling fluffy
son, and of course eating dinner with mrs. higurashi.

i love it.

it is a little dark, not something tht i would normally read.

i'm an empath, so that kind of stuff really affects me. i feel what the characters feel

but i do love it.
i've realized that if you minus that fact that inu is a hanyou, he and my hubby are one in the same.
kinda weird, but every fan girls dream. i just wish he had the long silver hair....sigh
anyways, i love it. keep it up.
fluffysgirl802005
person MerelyTruth
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello ! French mother of three girls who love mangas, I’m currently reading your wonderful story and find it full of special actions and slang’s words like candies I’d devour and enjoy. And that’s a lot of situations very special… poor Kagome, in love with such an Inuyasha !!! That’s so delightful !

Of course, you don’t believe what said some bad tongues who flamed you ! they are persons that don’t understand something and, above all, that don’t know to do constructive review. I find that your writing is GOOD, that characters and actions are something worth of my consideration. How can you manage to put on paper such ideas, plot, characters (I stay jaw low…) ?!?

I winch, I laugh, I sweat, I meet horror, questions, madness in your story, and I love it ! Thank you very much and DON’T STOP, please !!! Bons baisers de France…
person butterflysuki
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GEEZ!!! I sit down to check out your story for the heck of it, meaning only to read the first chapter, maby the second, and I read FOURTEEN CHAPTERS!!! Before I know it it's one thirty in the morning and I'm dying to read more! Dang it! Well, I'm reviewing now because this can only be an absolutely amazing story to captivate the reader to the extent that it has captivated me. Absolutely amazing and wonderfully written. (too much cussing for my taste, but hey that's the story I guess). Can't wait to go to sleep, and wake up so I can go to class then come home and read more.
person Ryan
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job on your story I can not wait to read the end of it. I think it is great and you have great talent. Keep up the excellent work. P.S. thanks for the great Story
person Dimepieceleo
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK YOU HAVE RECAIMED YOUR THRONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT HAS TO ONE OF THE BEST
I cried and laughted and screamed and howled and the bet issue that WAS PRICELESS
I am grown so I will admit that you were right them getting together this way was so
much better and well worth it, because you are right " THE BEST THINGS IN LIFE ARE
WORTH FIGHTING FOR."
Believe it or not you have given me a real life check yourself and see what is going on around you.
You should do this for a living and get pay at it, you were born with it in your BLOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Jaime
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Perfect!
person chanda
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I never doubted you would give us a happy ending...
Great update, I laughed, cried and cried some more...

Chanda
person Snowfall
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a great chapter. Poor Inu, downing pills. And, Kag's, all bones. The way you have brought them together is bittersweet. I'm not surprised. They really were flagrant with their sexual exploits earlier on and I think that they need to develop a relationship in which they can behave respectfully toward one another. I would like to see the get together. The banter between the characters is done very well. I liked the betting. The entire chapter was very well balanced.

I anxiously await your next chapter.

Snowfall
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVEr!!!!!!!!