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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww crap! Got behind again with school and work. I never saw the twist with Rin's post trauma coming. *Sigh* That's so fricking wrong. But, it fits the story. Can't wait to see how the whole deal with Inuyasha laying off Kagome goes. HA! Looks like it's not going too smoothly so far. But yeah...I'm on the edge of my fricking seat waiting for more!!! Update soon please? ^^
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, seriously,...i'm gonna kill inuyasha myself. he's an idiot. and i cant handle it anymore *Sucker punches Inuyasha, while he's human and runas away*. jeesh, what an idiot. i feel SSSOOO bad for Kagome. it makes me sick how he acts. like a complete jerk, she deserves better. but she deserves him. its so not fair. i just wish he would stop being an idiot.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, well. i have to say two things. i love your story. but i have never wanted to stop reading a story as much as i have your in the past few chapters. not that your a bad writer, cuz i really do LOVE your story. i just HATE inuyasha. and i think i'll stop reading if he doesnt smarten his ass up soon. the last chapter started well, but then it turned around with him, and i just wanted to tear of his fucking pretty boy, drug messed, bank and (whoever that other dud is, hiten, right?) listening to, EARS! heres hoping for the best is the next chappie.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GGRRR. stupid Inuyasha. what an baka. i feel me IQ going down, ever time he opens his mouth. its starting to hurt my head.
ANNEEEEways...good story. yeah, Rin has snapped (its so sad, really. cuz it happens... but i find it amusing when ppl go crazy. *shrug* i guess i'm just evil muahaha) poor Sesshoumaru. at least he opened up. thats a step in the right direction. i just have a question...more of an amusing point... will he attend the groups with her like he did when she was at school. i find the mental pic of the whole chorus scene with him and her, set in a group-help setting amusing. *stifles a chuckle*..erm...i mean...how sad.
anyways, another great chappie (i guess...even with Inuyasha. albeit, i wish he would listen to Ryen and get it together.)...oh that reminds me. Ryen is awesome! very cool.
keep it up
~Anime Fan~
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ANNEEEEways...good story. yeah, Rin has snapped (its so sad, really. cuz it happens... but i find it amusing when ppl go crazy. *shrug* i guess i'm just evil muahaha) poor Sesshoumaru. at least he opened up. thats a step in the right direction. i just have a question...more of an amusing point... will he attend the groups with her like he did when she was at school. i find the mental pic of the whole chorus scene with him and her, set in a group-help setting amusing. *stifles a chuckle*..erm...i mean...how sad.
anyways, another great chappie (i guess...even with Inuyasha. albeit, i wish he would listen to Ryen and get it together.)...oh that reminds me. Ryen is awesome! very cool.
keep it up
~Anime Fan~
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The last two chapters were great; a confused Inu and heart-torn Sess. Poor Rin. Even though Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome is a very real reaction, I bet Naraku does have a hand in her hallucinations too. Sneaky bastard. I'm glad Sess is is standing by her and going to try to get her some help.
OMG! Kag's would let Inu get away with that?! I would be so embarassed. If I didn't say so before, the whole stairwell christening was great, especially when Kag's blurted it out with all those girls in the locker room. Talk about wanting the earth to open up and swallow you! What I want to know is, what was so great about 'the talk' that had Inu in such a peppy mood? Is he really that much of a hentai. Or, did he just enjoy torturing Ryen? BTW, parental intervention is really becoming a pain in the ass. Make the kids miserable enough and they might take off. And, why can't Kagome control herself? I guess raging teenage hormones combined with a sexy puppy-earred hanyou can be pretty lethal to any girls integrity. You've got my curiosity piqued with Inu's mother issues. It will be interesting to see that unfold.
Hiten and Bank are just waiting in the wings for things to fall apart for Inu, and lend a hand if they could, I'll bet. Wonder if Naraku sent them. You've got so many little plot lines that it keeps the story very interesting. Don't forget our dear Sango and Miroku. If anyone could handle Hiten and Bank, it would be them.
Oh well, enough of my dribble. I love the story. Keep writing.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
OMG! Kag's would let Inu get away with that?! I would be so embarassed. If I didn't say so before, the whole stairwell christening was great, especially when Kag's blurted it out with all those girls in the locker room. Talk about wanting the earth to open up and swallow you! What I want to know is, what was so great about 'the talk' that had Inu in such a peppy mood? Is he really that much of a hentai. Or, did he just enjoy torturing Ryen? BTW, parental intervention is really becoming a pain in the ass. Make the kids miserable enough and they might take off. And, why can't Kagome control herself? I guess raging teenage hormones combined with a sexy puppy-earred hanyou can be pretty lethal to any girls integrity. You've got my curiosity piqued with Inu's mother issues. It will be interesting to see that unfold.
Hiten and Bank are just waiting in the wings for things to fall apart for Inu, and lend a hand if they could, I'll bet. Wonder if Naraku sent them. You've got so many little plot lines that it keeps the story very interesting. Don't forget our dear Sango and Miroku. If anyone could handle Hiten and Bank, it would be them.
Oh well, enough of my dribble. I love the story. Keep writing.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn right it gets better, if anything bad happens to her again, she's gonna lose her fukin mind. but good chappy!
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, wow. one of the best chapters yet! i really do hope that inuyasha beats the living shit out of those two idiots (bankotsu and hiten). i mean really, he was finally getting good. and i was finally getting over the need to kill inuyasha myself. i felt so bad for him and kagome, and THIS has to happen. so not cool. just a small request...please let inuyasha not go back to being an idiot. i dont think i can handle reading this story anymore if he does. there is just so much stupidity i can handle *sighes, and shakes head*
but the whole seesh/rin thing in this chappie made up for the idiocy of dumb and dumber (bankotsu and hiten- you can figure out who's dumb and who's dumber). its sad, cause its so true to life. i have a question, do you know somebody that was raped? cause i do, and that's pretty much what happened to her (minus the part where she thought her raper was her boyfriend, albeit she did think she saw her raper around. very hard time for everybody, especially her bf)
anyways,...great chappie.
keep it up, and update soon! ^_^
~Anime Fan~
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but the whole seesh/rin thing in this chappie made up for the idiocy of dumb and dumber (bankotsu and hiten- you can figure out who's dumb and who's dumber). its sad, cause its so true to life. i have a question, do you know somebody that was raped? cause i do, and that's pretty much what happened to her (minus the part where she thought her raper was her boyfriend, albeit she did think she saw her raper around. very hard time for everybody, especially her bf)
anyways,...great chappie.
keep it up, and update soon! ^_^
~Anime Fan~
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright... I can't breath until you get this story done. I'm getting evil looks from my boyfriend because all I do is read this Damned story. I'm additicted. The plot is great and as much as I hate to say it *hangs head* me being such a nympho makes your story even better. *smiles* Even though I dont think Shessy could be so loving, its still good to laugh everytime he gets so close to what he desires and then gets turned down. I love it! *sighs* Keep up the good work...
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!! *huffs* it took me FOREVER to finally catch up to you in chapters. I've been trying to read this whole story, but it's taken a long time. I'm a new reader and reviewer and i gotta say that i'm lovin' your story!!! it's so great! there aren't that many stories like this out there so it's a nice change!!! a REALLY nice change!i just can't help but growl whenever you put sesshoumaru with Rin (what can i say? I'm in love with that guy! ^.^) but i also have to say that i love your OC Ryen (btw, how do you say his name? i can't figure it out) keep it coming! Oh! and here's a present for you for your awsome story! *throws a can of cookies*
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That one was soo funny. I'm glad Ryen beat the shit out of Naraku, that bitch deserved it. HEHEHEHEHE I LOVE THIS STORY AND I'M GONNA BE SAD WHEN ITS DONE