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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In regards to the Adult Fanfiction Curse of the Dragon I would like to say thank you this has been a wonderful story so far and i can't wait to read more. I also believe you have great talent as a writer and hope you will consider publishing some of your own stories obvioulsy you have the talent.
Thanks
Thanks
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God.. this story is like a drug.. i want.. no, NEED! more!
ROAR
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ROAR
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!! Man, I was wondring for a second if you were going to have Kags and Rin go at it for a few. That would have been hot, but damn girl! I can not even believe I just read that! That was one of the hottest lap dances I have ever seen!! Keep them coming!
Kittenn
Kittenn
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! This is getting sooooooooooooooooooooo GOOD!!!!!!!!! Please update asap!!!!!!
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg... when Rin was doubtin herself.. that really made me feel bad... but... everything turned out good in the end.. (i think..). Hiten was beaten to a bloodly pulp by Bankotsu... InuYasha and Kagome had some uh.. i guess you could call it "alone time" ^^;;... and Rin finally realizes that she loves Sesshoumaru with everything she has.... oh yeah.. and Sesshoumaru saved Rin before she drowned... yep, all good things.. except...
you made a stupid cliffy!!!!!! argh.. please hurry and update!! :]
you made a stupid cliffy!!!!!! argh.. please hurry and update!! :]
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I've been reading your story like over and over again I LOOVE IT! Even tho it's not finish. LOL The first time I read it I thought it was one of those stories where people never update but when I was checking ouyt all the sotries on AFF.Net and I saw you had a whole lot more chapters I was liek YAY!! LOL Kepp up the good work your stories r GRREAT!
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet ass! tell im you love im rin!!! great chapter! and yey! i'm excited that you have other fic stories to come!
constructive critism: i think this story would have done better as 2 seperate stories. you could have ended it after naraku was put in jail and after rin was saved by sess. and then the second story would have been about the 'aftermath' of sorts... you know? i know that for a while there the story got too long for me, but now i'm into it again! it's great! and i always look forward to your posts! keep up the good work!
constructive critism: i think this story would have done better as 2 seperate stories. you could have ended it after naraku was put in jail and after rin was saved by sess. and then the second story would have been about the 'aftermath' of sorts... you know? i know that for a while there the story got too long for me, but now i'm into it again! it's great! and i always look forward to your posts! keep up the good work!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The Story is pretty good well the storyline anyways, your spelling needs a little working on, the whole goth perspective thing is a little immature but also gives it a little spice to the story i suppose, kind of says that whatever you state yourself in school doesn't really last long though. the drug use with the characters is a little offensive but it doesn't bother me to much. other than that i think it's a very interesting story and i have been reading it every chance i get. awesome work on the sex scenes, can't wait for Sesshomaru and Rin to not be interrupted. oh and *pouts* gives Koga-kun a little slack ne? haha.
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?