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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a pleasant break from all the angst. Very hot ferris wheel ride. You have given Sess more solidity with all the dialogue. I can't believe that you didn't let them get away with their antics. I figured that they would be smart enough to not get caught. Nice chapter.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... what A releif! A great chapter... only one problem though. You do know that the tallest and fastest roller coaster in the world is at Cedar Point, right? It is 420 ft tall, and goes 120 miles an hour... sometimes faster. It's called "Top Thrill Dragster." If you did know, then good, if not, then now you know. I am not critisizing... lol... just informing. I loved the chapter and can not wait for the sex scene with Rin and Sess...
Kittenn
Kittenn
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great, I loved it.
It would have been funny if Sesshomaru caught the smell of fear in his brother on the ferris wheel, after Yash gave him hell on the first ride, then kicked his ass again...
I can see why you loved writing this chapter...I would have too.
Keep up the great writing until next time,
Chanda
It would have been funny if Sesshomaru caught the smell of fear in his brother on the ferris wheel, after Yash gave him hell on the first ride, then kicked his ass again...
I can see why you loved writing this chapter...I would have too.
Keep up the great writing until next time,
Chanda
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. I started reading it two days ago and i just could not stop. Keep up the great work.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I am so Happy! 2 reasons... 1 Kagome got wild! Its about time that girl laid back and got her freak on! and 2 Rin FINALLY got some action! I loved that chapter and I cant wait for the next one!!
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uh-oh... Kagome and Rin in trouble??... hmm... wonder how that's going to turn out.. ;].. lol.. umm.. just update soon.. okay!?
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey sorry for not reviewing in a while but life has been an absolute BITCH.
Ilove the last two chaps kagome drunk priceless
rin and sesshy unforgettable love love love to read up and review this story
this is a highlight of my day
Ilove the last two chaps kagome drunk priceless
rin and sesshy unforgettable love love love to read up and review this story
this is a highlight of my day
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My first time reviewing your story.....I like it a lot....just thought I pass on the reminder....Make sure you put on a disclamer in the beginning of your story....I would hate to see them delete your great story......I'll be waiting for the next chapter....
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
busted. lol... hey! i liked the chapter! good for rin!! ;)