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This is a truly WONDERFUL story that I thoroughly enjoyed; please continue writing such great stories!!!

I read this in like 3 days... That is saying a lot. This is a great story.. Thanks so much...

this is just so... so... brilliant :d i'm still gasping for breath :d thank you for this :)

hey.... omg it took me 3 months to read your story. i am impressed very very impressed. if only i could write like you. you are a very good writer and i cant wait to read your other stories

OMG I love you!!!! I would give you the worlds biggest sugar cookie!!!

You did it all you made me happy sad angry frustrated

I cried, and laughed my ass off to the point were everyone in my house thought I was nuts!

As much as I loved the ending I almost didn't want it to end!!!! Though one regret I do have is I no longer have any want what so ever to continue to read shades of gray.....I just love bank too much to watch him be the bad guy... My favorite part of the whole thing was when he tried to drop sand bags on poor Kouga kun! I do have one question though.....wtf happened to kanna?! She just dropped of the face of your fic....and I was soooo curious. I also owe you for 5 different songs which now reside on my hardrive. "Turn me on" "Leaving on a Jetplane" ( jewels version) "Dead mans party" "On bended knee" and my new absolute favorite in the world "Champagne supernova" Your songs were added in so perfectly, that is wasn't corny or over done in the least bit, like it usually is, the songs didn't take over the fic, just accentuated it absolutely perfectly! In fact I'm still listening to the last song while writing this. Sweetie pie you are one talented super-bitch! And I know that one day you are going to be an amazing author of best sellers! I'll be one of the firsts to buy a copy! I also failed once again to leave a comment every other chapter like this fic deserves, but I got so caught up dammit!!!!!!! I cried so hard when Miro died, and when Kags walked out....I just cant express how much i loved this fic, never before had reading a fic left me with such a feeling. I feel like Ive been on a long ass journey filled with enough pot holes to bust the axil on my jeep, but hot damn if it wasn't worth every second of it. Every thing was worked out perfectly, and all the heartache in between just made it so much sweeter in the end!Its one thing to write something good, its another to write something like THIS. I think in one of the A/N you said something about not being able to draw, well I can draw and I'll tell you in all honestly, you might not be able to draw a stick figure, but this story is a work of art, a masterpiece painted in the colors of the emotions you made everyone feel while reading this, and its absolutely beautiful and never EVER let anyone tell you different. I am a total book worm, I've read everything from dean koontz, steven king, tamora peirce, scot westerfeild and just about everyone in between. And I will tell you this story kept me more entertained than just about any book. I would read it again. In fact I think I will, and maybe this time, Ill leave it more of the reviews it reserves. And about that one person who flamed you, they can shove it down their throat and pull it out their ass cause honey they are jealous. You're in college right? Well there are people who study libral arts and spend there whole lives writing and never come close to stuff like this, I can only imagine how much better your going to get, and I only pray that for the sake of my sanity you keep up with the fan fics, even if you do become the famous author we all know your destined to be, please PLEASE dont stop writing and posting here. You've set the bar for other fan fic authors and youve set it good and high. I know Im ranting, but I can't help it. You deserve it girly girl and never ever let anyone discourage you!!!

O__________________________O ~Throws rocks anyway~ NOOOOO NOT RIN!!!!!!!!!! Lol just kidding ~Turns rocks into cotten balls~ I know fluffy is going to come around with tensaiga....BUT STILL!!!!!!!! Naraku isn't just dead....hes deader than dead....hes alreadly embalmed and burning in hell he just doesnt know it yet but hes totally fucked...God this story is fricken great, it has me glued to my seat, Im so glad I found this after it was finished, if I actually had to wait for updates those cotten balls would not be so friendly....lol forgot what chapter Im on.....guess I got a little too involved....

13. Football, chorus, and cheerleaders, oh my! What a predicament you are weaving. I think we all knew it was naraku messing with rin, lets face it, as dense as he is, Kouga just doesn't have it in him. Not that my statement is prejudiced by a lasting infatuation with a certain blue eyed cutie...~Sighs~
It will be interesting to see how sesshy handles this particular nuisance, I know what I want to happen and none of it is good for Naraku, but what YOU will do about it is what interests me. Also Im sure Kikyo and Kagura still have their roles, can't wait to see what happens.

15, Awwwwe, I think I just fell in love with Miroku! Lol, well maybe not, but I'll be damned if that wasn't the sweetest thing, comforting Rin like that. And OMG Sesshy half naked? I missed this?! Hehe, I'm just playing, Sesshy is hot, but I still only have eyes for a certain sarcastic hanyou . Your story is great so far, it really has me captivated, though I must admit that I am extremely impatient and can't wait for Kagome to finally realize what a great guy he is underneath all that hostility and sarcasm. So Inu has a dark past hmmmm? Acid and Coke at the same time HOLY SHIT BATMAN! Someone was trippin big time, add that to his demonic nature and bad things were almost inevitable.

20, Gah! so much has gone on in the last few chapters I dont know where to start! LOVED Naraku getting his ass kicked, though I knew he couldnt die just yet, it was a guilty pleasure to imagine rin knocking him senseless. You had me scared shitless with the whole gun thing, my poor Inukun!!!!! Fucking bastards...Needless to say the shit has hit the fan, and once again you leave me with only a slight peice of limey-ness! Rin and Sessh in the shower I give you 5 stars!!! ***** <~ See? Lol, I've never been one to really like the whole sideline relationships, but the web youve weaved with rin and sesshy has me glued to my screen! Only thing I kind of have a complaint about is rins broke wrist, shouldnt she be in ungodly pain??? I've sprained my wrist before, and let me tell you it hurts like a bitch. Though minor details such as this dont really mess with the story line I just thought I should point it out. Still love your story though and wouldnt change a thing!

Oh oh ! ~Raises hand~ I'm reading! ~only on chap 7~ I just got done with "Shades of Gray" and had to check out your other stories, I love your writing style, I haven't had a chance to leave a review for shades yet, but thats cause I only just found it like a week ago and got so caught up with it I kind of....forgot...to...review... >> ~Laughs nervously~ But by time I finished it, I just had so much to say about the whole thing I didn't really know what to say, lol. But seeing how this one is so long, I plan on reviewing every couple of chapters to avoid said speechlessness. I kind of like how you strayed from the normal "Inu vs Sess" thing and skipped over some of those awkward "I'm sorry I've never spent time with you," moments and gave them a somewhat brotherly relationship in the beginning to build from. We know we can all see Inu as the typical bad ass, but Kags as a stuck up prep, thats different, though much easier to see than "The quiet nerdy girl" most school based AUs make her out as. I mean in the series it does show a bit of her high school life and shes not exactly an outcast. And don't worry about basing the whole school thing on your own high school experiences, to expect you to be an expert on the Japanese school systems is outrageous. There is only so much research an author can do for a story before it turns from a fun creative writing, to an out and out boring research assignment. After all this story isn't really about their classes and schedules, more like the cliques and social standings of its characters, and that my friend is the same no matter what part of the world you're in. Jocks Preps Geeks Stoners Skaters Cheerleaders Freaks.....etc, there are many diffrent names in many different languages for them, but they're all basically the same. I think its funny that you threw in Jakan, seeing how his toad like appearance usually keeps him from most AU stories, and I'm interested to see what kind of part he will play, I'm sure you put him there for a reason.
And Rin with the cuts and bruises on her wrists, curiouser and curiouser. Something makes me think it has to do with Naraku, but was he the one who did it, or are they self inflicted? The fact that they are on her wrists leads me to think the later. As with Shades of Gray this story seems to be filled with lots of dark secrets, can't wait to figure them all out. Keep up the good work!!! ~Kijo