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Another great story....You are definitely one of my favourite writers...I will look forward to reading more of your stories!

awww that was cte, and very well writen, a few minor things like not mentioning InuYasha taking his clothes off and such, but they're only very minor details nothing to worry about, i hope to see more from you in the future!!!

I think writing may come a bit more naturally to you than you think...

I like it :D

inuyasha's got the oedipus syndrome.

I kinda decided to review after I read the spatula thing... *picks up wooden cooking spoon* What? It's just in case! I'm sad to say that I read both Convalescence and Cohesion and didn't review, *holds spoon in defense position* even though they were both beatifully plotted and written. You say that writing doesn't come naturally to you, which I, in truth, find a bit difficult to believe. Unless it took you a very long time to write all three fics, and only posted them while shaking in fear of what people were going to say. (Sound a bit crazy, don't I?) Well, either way, they all came out extraordinarily well. Lemon was real' hot, and the words, 'toxic ramen' made me laugh, even if they weren't meant to be funny. I'll shut up now. Bye!

This was just so cute and at the same time so Hot :) I loved it! Are you planning to write more? Please do! I'm new here, if you'd like to go check out my story I would really appreciate your opinion...Great job, keep it up! This Youkai Musashi can't wait for the next chapter...Inu was just...aww so cute...bad puppy, pretending to be sick... :) When you have the time and if you want to go check out my story, I really really value reviews (in fact I think I'm addicted to them...I desperately need reviews...) Shameless self promotion, I know...but it is my first fic and I'm kinda nervous about it (although amazing people made me feel more confident, Zelix being one of them) And I loved your story, I want more! Again, great job :)