rate_review Reviews

OH MY FUCKING GOD!!! THAT WAS KICK ASS!!!SEQUEL!!! SEQUEL!!!!! *chants* PLEASE!!!! thats was WOW!!!

I think that was really good. You wrote this very well. I comend you on this story.

I like this, it was great.

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

uh... Ok, this story wasn't all that good... For starters, yeah, you were right, extremely out of character, for Sesshoumaru, mostly, but also for Kagome, and Inuyasha as well. Still, this story shows a great deal of potential, and I believe that, if you removed the two ending thing, it might be okay. Rape, or no rape. And, in the end of the rape scenerio, I suggest you don't have Inuyasha stop suddenly. That is just nearly impossible, or it'd be damn hard the way you described his lust and his anger.

Oh... lol, it wasn't three endings but two with another part to it.
Nice. In the End (it doesn't even matter! Sorry, fav song by Linkin Park)
but so In the End, you're definately not as Twisted as I am.

If you'd like to know what I mean, (probably dont but lol, cuz I'm very
very very twisted) check out my profile. I have three stories up.

Back to your story, I skimmed over the second ending, to check it out. It
is good. I'm glad I did. You'll be getting another review from me sometime
or another, can't promise anything soon, but when I do I will have read it
completely. I liked how it went, the second ending. So I will HAVE to read it.

~~~~Twisted!~~~~

That was good, me originally looking for hentai and... well something a bit naughtier settled for just reading the first ending. Good job, I really liked it. Short, but good. I seemed like a one shot cut into endings... lol well anyways, good job.

your crazy..................... but i love yah!!!!!!!!!!!! haha for a writer to have two possible endings that coinsides each other is brilliant !!!!!!!!!!!!!! i couldn't help but feel a shiver of excitement. great job hope you keep it up.

i hope there is a sequal

Very Good so far. Will read on.