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by MidsummerDreamer

person Niko
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great story- I loved the continuation - Would u consider a third part?
person maggie
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love both
good work
person Ino
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved both of them. I read them last night and didn't get a chance to review until now.
You kept all characters in character and it's happening in the time era as of the anime/manga. I do like AU but this was really... nice. I can actually see it happening :)

I read so many stories where people forget about InuYashas gruffiness, grouchiness. But you kept it and I love you for it.

Keep writing, this storie or any storie. You got some talents :)
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, your skills amaze me. Love it, love it, LOVE IT!
person drake220
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cute. continue it please! if he's this bad during pregnancy, what's inu going to be like during labor? hehe!!
person Zelix (Not logged on, A.K.A \"King of Plots\")
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The sequel to one of my favourite fics, this is excellent, REALLY excellent, it is a shame people haven't reviewed this yet but they will, i know it since this fic is a gem, a real gem. Write more stories in the future, i'm interested and you're a fantastic writer, see ya!