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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's 6:04 in the morning and I'm too tired to say how great it was in depth so here's the short version, it was GREAT! Like the whole thing, very warm, cuddly and cute. Going to bed now but with sweet dreams. EK!
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so sweet. job well done!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!!!! Awesome lemon! Really good job with the..ummm...descriptions. However, at the beginning with Sesshy and Yasha, I don't think that you needed that part. It gives an imaginary reason why Sesshy is so cold and emotionless and everything, but it isn't nessesary for the Inu/Kag pairing. I think that you could've gone straight to the lemon after Inuyasha confesses his love to Kagome. (unless of course you wanted to make it a Inu/Sess pairing as well). Other than that, I enjoyed this one-shot lemon a lot!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very very very nice... I'm very finicky in my lemon reading... and even more so when it comes to reviewing... EXCELLENT work!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was decidedly enjoyable! Your writing is well done and virually error-free which is really impressive given the length of the one-shot. I liked the way you gave them a catalyst that easily could have led to a quick romp, but that you still took your time allowing the characters to approach the lemon naturally.
I liked the way you used Kouga to advance the situation, but without really making him the enemy. Sure, he is a little dense (or is it stubborn?) with Kagome's feelings and sure he gets caught up in his testestorone and hits her accidently. But you didn't paint him as a boring one dimensional plot element. He was still in character and clearly cared for her even though his actions were less than above board.
The interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha felt very right as well. I liked the way you peppered their experience with discussion and reflection. Good times!
I liked the way you used Kouga to advance the situation, but without really making him the enemy. Sure, he is a little dense (or is it stubborn?) with Kagome's feelings and sure he gets caught up in his testestorone and hits her accidently. But you didn't paint him as a boring one dimensional plot element. He was still in character and clearly cared for her even though his actions were less than above board.
The interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha felt very right as well. I liked the way you peppered their experience with discussion and reflection. Good times!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.. wooooow. that's all i can say.
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great one shot! It was very detailed, vivid, and romantic. You could feel the love in the sexual act. It wasn’t just let me get in real quick. I loved it! Keep up the great work.
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! You did a great job!
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I love this fic, just love it *waves banners for Midsummerdreamer*!! I got all sweaty, not to mention that my monitor screene is again steamy...God...Why did I have to be born as such a pervent!! Write more fafiction!! If you need some lecherous twisted idea for pairings or somethin' call on me!!(I'm listening too much to eric prydz...)
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love both
good work
good work