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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter. Sorry I couldn't read it sooner, but my computer was down and face it with this website I can't really read it in school. Computer back now, so Update soon please
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo getting really excellent!Please add more I really want to know how bad InuYasha got his asss kicked!
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
READ up to chap 3 and you deserve a review. Will skip over chap 1 because it was unrealistic BUT the lemon was great, chap two was good and three LOL I love when Kagome went wild on Sess great! and Inuyasha...well no comment, I don't mind seeing him in a bad light and even if he's with Kikyo I don't think he would only think of Kagome as a "shard detector" BUT it's possible so honestly I don't have a problem.
okay good job now I will go read some more of this story!
okay good job now I will go read some more of this story!
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CHAP 5 I thin LMAO oh so funny and loved the whole kouga, den, mating game everything about it. was wondering cause for a moment you made it seem like Sess would get more of kagome and I thought it should be the other way but so far the story is doing a good job of the sharing thing
INUYASHA LOL I laughed, when he found out good job
INUYASHA LOL I laughed, when he found out good job
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LESSON LEARNED THE HARD WAY-EXCELLCENT LOVED THE DP,ABOUT TIME, and in the chap before when Sess helped Kouga...it was suprisingly a turn on, great job again with the sharing.
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OKAY READ WHOLE THING and I applaude you from taking a simple lemon and turning it into a real story.
NOw I just BEG you not to let inuyasha mate her or something, he does not deserve it and will just turn the story into a circus,
these last chaps were great, very good job
NOw I just BEG you not to let inuyasha mate her or something, he does not deserve it and will just turn the story into a circus,
these last chaps were great, very good job
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh and could you put a side chap or something and tell us about sango and miroku, I have no clue why everyone ignores them I think they are the best couple
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is amazing, I really enjoy reading it! I think you write the story very well and can't wait to continue reading this wonderful story!
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! I can't wait to see what happend to Inuyasha.