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for Midsummer Night's Dream

by KogasAngel

person marta178
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woow I like the path this story is taking >;D
The fact that she is staying miko is better them to turn her into a demon, after all if humans could change to demons just by chosing a demon mate Inuyasha only have to chose a demon mate to himself, therefor it would make the story a little modified ... weeeelllll keep up the good work and hope you update soon!! ^_____^
person starlet angel
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I always knew Kagome had it in her to dominate Fluffy ;) And now Inuyasha knows where Kagome is located...Hah! This'll show him what happens when jerks don't treat the women who like them right! Another great chapter! <0^-^0>
person Rosa
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story,I love it!Can't wait to read more!
person Hillary
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooo so good as usual but please let there be another three some
person Cookie6
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Inuyasha is an ass. I love Sesshoumaru and Kouga in here. They are so cute. Update.
person Jasmine
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is sooooo good. Are they going to fight?
person whirleeq
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was really *hot*... Really, really hot... who knew the girl had it in her!

Sesshy starting to have feelings for her... hmm... that could be a bad thing. Especially if one or the other of her two mates start to get possessive -- and Sesshy already has poor Kouga hoodwinked and over a barrel.

BTW I'm sorry if I seemed a bit rude in my last review - I try hard not to be -- I know how hard it is to write and please everyone. I only tend to make criticisms if I really like the story, and I always try to do so as politely as possible. I love the idea of having Sesshy paired with a human (mainly Kagome or Sango, not rin - I think that's more of a father/daughter relationship). It forces his character to do some deep soul searching regarding his superiority complex.
person valerie
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hy i really love your story and boy kagome is so lucky with this to gourgeous man!!!!!Keep your good work and i also really love striking a deal you're a great writer
person Ceaseless Cloudy Days
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooow. That was SO hot. This is probably one of the best stories I've seen here. Please continue soon!
person KawaiiDemons
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, I knew Shessh was fronting about his feelings for Kagome. I knew somrthing was up. I'm realing feeling this story and I hope you update it soon. ~KD