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by Atropa

person kitten
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O MY FUCKING GOD!!!


this is the best lemon i have read so far!!!

i would never have thought haveing that cuple would be so sexi !!!


you should write more...lots lots lots more ^.^

person Anon
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:P
person ducusdraconis
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked how you left some thig's hanging, made it seem like it wa just one part of something bigger.
person KogasAngel
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, My fingers were too fast. Anyways, it was a great story and I don't think that it needs to be continued. You did wonderful. thanks for the great story.
person Anon
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no!!! what about sess/kagura???? *cries* but... it was a good story...
person AnjelRocker (not logged in)
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story... I only wish you did a Lemon with InuYasha and Ayame... it was a great story :D
person Kill Bill
schedule February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I guess of the mess the boys made all over
Sango, kind of messy. I'm sorry this short o well. Please
update as soon as possible!
person Kill Bill
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello?
person Anjel Rocker (not logged in)
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a beautiful lemon! :D
person ducusdraconis
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's about time, and is well done, and very well done