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for On the Sea is Where I'll Be

by narea

person Carojun
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this story, it's really interesting, especially now that Kagome's not angry as much.
person ptbear
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens between Kagome and Inusyasha and if Kagome actually escapes.
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLZ.....UPDATE.....SOON!!!!!!!!!!! U must, I'm going crazy over here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person InuFan
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ur story was good, u should write more
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
person TheDoctors_Girl
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a romp from start to finish! I have most definately enjoyed the ride so far especially the oh so good tension filled scenes you've able writen between 'yasha and 'gome (although i still find it a bit creepy and weirdo like to tell authors i think there hentai scenes are excellent- go figure). Anyway i don't even mind the lack of plot because you can hold my interest with just the characters interactions. Personally i think Miroku is hilarious especially how you describe his eyebrow manouvering it cracks me up everytime!!! I always find it hard to think of original plots cause there are so many good (and woeful) inuyasha stories out there, like over 50 000 on one site i visited the otherday that being unique is almost impossible but im sure you'll think of something that won't disapoint any of us. Maybe there could be some sort of huge storm (or water demon) to throw some sort of conflict into the equation but dont mind me im simply rambling maybe the boat gets destroyed and they end up on a desert island (how cliche is my thinking today?)or maybe inuyasha gets betrayed by someone in his crew and ends up in a dungeon etc im not much help really so ill stop now...

anyway cheers for a so far very diverting story and i cant wait for an update!
TheDoctors_Girl
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon, these story is realy good!
person inu
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great ch. Update soon "cool"!!!!!!
person DestinysElixir
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You seriously need to update! I love this story, especially the sexual tension betw Inuyasha and Kagome!
person lost child
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just started reading this and let me say...I'm hooked. Now you have no choice but to update for I love to see how stories end. Ur a pretty good writer, so keep up the good work