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Someone's been listening to a little too much Breaking Benjamin.

A rather interesting story, though I must say I absolutely loathe the pairing. Ignoring other characters for the sake of a barely recognized secondary character just doesn't seem like a good way to write a fanfic. I'm not insulting you or your ability, which is I must say; quite impressive. I'm just saying that your ability is being used on something that isn't necessarily a well traveled road. Either way, very well written.

awwwww wheres inuyasha! why must we have evil weird haired ginta.! its a great story but kagome's overreacting he was a friend not god she musnt suffer for his death
afterall he helped her on his own acoord!

this is the only review i have done during my long forays into aff land. the reason for this is that out of all of the many, many, many and i DO mean many(not that i don't do other things besides read on occasion) fanfics that i have read, yours is the one that has the most original plot line. your way of keeping your readers guessing what will happen next and of portraying the emotional struggle of the characters is excellent, at several points throughout your story i found myself having to stop and find something to wipe my face with because of my blubbering. anyway, because of all of that i found myself compelled to review when i had avoided it for so long.

by the way, people that think its wierd to have ginta as a main character are obviously stagnated in thier ability to think, comprehend, imagine and in any other way be creative and open minded in thier thought processes.

so, i see that by your update date its been almost a month (ok little over half a month) since your last posting, and you obviously have a completed or partially done chapter ready to post..........PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!!!

i would also like to take the time to suggest an equally good story(and if you feel the need to put this story on your recommends i highly agree with you) "Tales From the House of the Moon" by .......ummmmm i totally forgot, but hopefully you should be able to find it. its inuyasha of course and a sess/kag pairing of which i'm quite fond of

i will stop typing now, apparently my refusal to review has created an overflow of review spewage to which you have been the recipient of. bye, and again, please find it in your heart to post the next chapter, or maybe even two chapters, yeah.

Good story, Can't wait for the next chapter.

You have written a wonderful story so far, and I'm glad to see you update again. (bad me for not reviewing sooner!) It is kind surprising to see that you have so few reviews, but there's really no helping that. Some of the fics I've read I thought were very poorly written and unoriginal, yet people replied with rave reviews. *shrug* There's no accounting for taste, I suppose. I personally think the whole Kagome/Ginta pairing here seems rather interesting. It's refreshing to see a well written fic without the overly cliche pairings. (I have nothing against the normal pairings, and I enjoy some of the fics featuring them, but they're used so often it's hard to find anything original in many of the stories.)
I eagerly await the next chapter of your fic! And I wish you luck in finding a suitable editor.

Wow this story is great. It is definetly a lot different then stories that you usually see for Inuyasha and Kagome. I really want to see what will happen between Ginta and Kagome. But I also want to see what will happen between Kagome and Inuyasha. Keep up the great work.

i love you cuz u love foamy!!!!! ROAMY RULES... but anway not bad.... good....plot

I dont care what anyone says, this fic is awesome! I am a huge fan of alternate pairings, and there are times that the canon is just so... bleh. To overdone half the time. This is NEW! I've never ever stumbled across a Ginta/kagome fic. I love it, simply and totally adore it.
Out of all the secondary characters in this anime, Ginta has always been my favorite. His antics have always cracked me up, and with you writing a story to elaborate his personality, I've fallen for him all over again.
With Kagome, we're seeing a darker side of her. A more depressive edge to her personality. This is something that I'm overjoyed that your writing about. Yes we all know she's the glue in the little group and she's full of sunshine and bubbles, but she is also human. If half the writers spent their time and 'analyzed' their depictions of Kagome, they would realize that in a sense their writing a "mary-sue".
Sadly the fanbase for Alternate or non-canon couples is terribly small, even though there is a slew of Yaoi out there, we are the most hated of the writing community. It will never make any sense to me.
For this alone I thank you from the bottom of my heart for creating such a wonderful story. I am eagerly awaiting each update, the story can only get better in my eyes.
Bravo! You have a winner and a devoted fan!

MysticInca

I applaude your creative mind and very good use of grammar.I must say that I am impressed.

OMFG FOAMY RULES I HAV THE DVDS AND SHIRTS AND ALL OF THE STUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH GOOD STORY!