rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

you suck

i hate you


i hate you

im FLAMING YOU~!! setting your sorry ass on fire!

how DARE you do that to them!!! H"OW DARE "YOU!!!

hmm... shadow you make good points and i pretty much agree with you.

sometimes curiousity gets the best of us and we read things and
pairings we normally wouldnt. I agree that this story is very well
written and has great plot and description.. not to mention kudos
to EVERY song.. loves it! but... as cliche as everyone thinks inu/kag
relationship pairings are... they are based off of the tension that
you clearly see offset from what Takahashi Rumiko has created.

though it is good to be creative and venture off into a new idea,
keep in mind that flamers dont like this kind of shit. and by shit i mean
the pairings.. you are in deed a good writer. I myself write a lot of if not mostly
inuyasha and kagome pairings with a few sango and miroku but... just
be cautious and perhaps try an OOC and AU warning before you post up next
time... it will certainly cut down the flames.


Heather.

WOW!! Just WOW! I loved this fic to death ^_^

ok so now i have finished reading all the story.......i have to say again wonderfully written.............i just have to comment on something :) (sorry)...........i felt you rushed the whole ginta realizes he loves kagome if u can even call it that..............i see that ginta had sex with kagome so that he wouldn't feel lonely anymore..........he marked her..........i feel out of the act of sex u know whole animal instinct...........and because of that mark i feel that ginta felt he had a responsibility to her.........sure i think he loves her but not in that deep love like the love of a soulmate, but in the 'my life is a little more bearable with you here'................sorry just a thought...............anywho poor inuyasha he is gonna die lonely and bitter :( (truthfully i dont think inuyasha would ever be this evil but whatever)
great story.........u have great talent.............maybe you should write both of your continuations........i wanna see how you incorporate a live kouga as you put it into the story in #1 and how you put in inuyasha in #2

ok i have just finished reading invisible..........i have to say i saw this coming.....why else would you try to develop a secondary character............i must say you write beautifully but i have to disagree with your author's note explaining kagome's relationship with inuyasha and ginta. You said that what kagome has towards inu is like a crush and what she has towards ginta is love.............i'm sorry i just don't see it........on offense.....i just do not see any evidence to support why she fell in love with ginta............all i have read so far to justify her feelings is the fact that she has spent two months with him....hardly seeing him within those two months mind you and also that she has seen him naked.........i really dont see how this is love.......with inuyasha i understand i mean a bond is there they were together for two years going through the harsdest experiences imaginable ........that really united them even more, you cant just break that in 2 months..................i see ginta more of a crush and inu more like love.........alas this is not my fic so i just wanted to comment

aahhhh i love this fic, it made me cry lol
good job!!!!!!!!
i would LOVE to see the sequel it would be so badass, PLEASE make it and have it up soon, ill be looking forward to it

Holy Cow. What a great story. Your descriptions were so perfect I could feel the cold and the anguish of the characters. I have never thought of Ginta/Kagome fic before, although I do adore Ginta and Hikkaku and Kouga. The wolf boys are my favorites. It's late, my mind is shutting down. I had wanted to make this review longer and tell you everything i loved about this story, but that would take to long. I loved everything. Thanks for a great read.

mack another story where its kagome, ginta,and hakaku in the new tribe mabe that will be cool to your readers

I really liked this story. I have followed the story since it began and have been waiting to see how it would turn out. I thought that it was great the way it turned out between Kagome and Ginta. I would definately like to see a sequel to this story. Let me know when you post the sequel on the site.