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for Jailbirds

by Gyousei

person Bianca
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was funny. I can't wait until you update again because this story just keeps on getting more interesting. When is Inuyasha gonna be in the picture here??? Is he her hunny-bunny??? I want answers please!!!!X_X Well anyways, yeah, update soon!!!^.^
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didnt like the format of the last chapter, but over all this is an excellant read while waiting for Scars to update. In terms of fan ficdom, this one is pretty original. However, there is a lot of exosition, and not enough meat.



Overall, A
person Scorpinac
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, never mind about the two ladies, I checked the ep. guide at TVtome, and I remember them now(Princess married to a toad and duped girl being used by Spider-Heads, got it.). Hehheh, I can be so dense sometimes...(well, they were only one-shot characters, after all!)
person kansas
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say I have never reviewed a fan fic before but this one is awsome. It has so much potential ( in more than one way hehe). And it is actually amazingly well written please keep writing and dont take so long between chapters again I checking everyday to see if the new chapter was up!
person Scorpinac
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing. Will we get to find out *exactly* what Kagome did? And just what was Kohaku doing in Sango's dreams, I wonder? Also, help me out here - where are Tsuyu and Nazuna from, that is, which InuYasha stories? I'm failing to place the faces...
person Sassy Chan
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! You have a really orignal idea for a A/U! I like it alot! (Anyone besides me fucking sick of the Inuyasha Gang in High School A/Us!? Anyone!?) It's really nice and discriptive too....reminds me of the time I spent in Juvi.....:P Anyway, it's really bitchin! Keep up the good work! I can't wait until Inuyasha and Kagome meet.

Eri is the one with the headband, Ayumi is the one with long curly hair. Oh no! Dose this make a Inuyasha otaku loser, because I know this!?!? Damnit...oh well who gives a rat's ass.

Once again, awesome story! Wheee!
person Zelix
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, this is a REALLY good start, original and nice... hmm, i'm even more curious to how this will play out, more than ever now.
person Kieri Chan
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sounds different keep up the good work looking forward to the next chapter! how did kagome end up in the jail house? update soon!

kirei-Chan

P.S. please look up my stories! LOL

person Paranoid
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, you really have an inside view of the place. Nice story, waiting for more.
person zelix (Not logged on)
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this one should be interesting! You don't see too many prison fics around this site... maybe i'll start my own at some point but as for now: This is truly interesting, though i hope that in future chapters we will learn a bit more about the characters, plot ETC. All that, so let's see how this turns out shall we?