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for different shades of black

by animefan

person Anon
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
by any random chance do u have a thing for s&m, or possibly your characters? lol. Well, pretty good, long chappie, just a "smidgen" disturbing.
person dvs
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good and definitly dark. keep up the blood a bit more sex and I like your dialogue. hope to read more
person inunaiomi
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo, burn. the whole mate thing really is a big burn on his part. poor guy. he ahould like catch kagome cutting herself, or him cutting himelf or something, it be weird but, hot.
person SwapMeet
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dun, Dun, DUN!! ::crawls on floor with heavy raspy breathing"" "Must have more chapters!" I really like the story so far. Keep up the excellent work! (^ -)
person DarkLady
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FUCKING NOOOOOOOOOO SHE IS NOT HIS FUCKING MATE!!!!! DO SOMETHING TO GET RID OF IT PLEASE!
person CheshireAngel
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I'm lovin this story thus far....so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!! *gets down on hands and knees and BEGS* (CheshireAngel never begs for anything)
person DarkLady
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnn... let me guess kikyou has made an entrance lol i hope so anyway so everyone can be a bitch to her ~_^
person inunaiomi
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsum but, noooooooooooo god damn cliffy!
person me
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when is the lemon
person JAMIE
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CAN"T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHApter UPDATE SOON