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hey I thought this story was comepletely cool, and I also know a few things about wicca
You have a real knack for writing and I really envy you o well -__-

cheryl

I just got through chapter 1 and I have to say I like Goth Kagome. Yay for Goths! :-) It's a pretty good story so far. But, and I don't want you to get offended or anything, the spoiler said that you made Miroku Wiccan? Be careful with that one. I'm Wiccan and I'll be paying very close attention to the details. Something tells me that you'll know what your talking about when it comes to that particular belief system, but things like that are always touchy, you know. :-) Like I said, I'm not trying to make you mad or anything. You're probably Wiccan yourself or another one of the Goddess worshiping religions or are close to someone who is. Just remember that ignorance breeds ignorance and we've been working far too hard for far too long to stamp out negative stereotypes. So, please, be careful, be accurate, and be respectful. If I've made you in anyway upset with this review, I'm really sorry and you can feel free to erase it. But I wanted you to know that I like the first chapter and to ask you to be careful. That's all. Thanks.
Blessed Be
Ashes

hi!!! :) this story is totally awesome!!! I really think that you should keep writing, and I totally think that YOU should have been the owner of Inu-Yasha! Right On ::SIGH:: I wish I had you writing talents...
o well
NEways, I just wanted to compliment you, and get you to update.
LATER! ;)

I'd be willing to help out. I'm an english major so I can check for errors fairly well and I have a bsic knowledge of wicca. If you still need the help, write me at gamedesigner1@yahoo.com

If you like, I could beta for you, well, as far as the spelling and grammer goes. I'd be more then happy to help. ^^

Awesome chappie!!!! Lol... Cliff hangerish cause I am anxious to know what it will be like at kagome's house... I can only imagine...

Hey! Awesome story you have here! Update more often!!! I check online everyday to see if you update!! Awesome story, I love how the characters are.

I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! Please update soon, I really would like to know what happens.

I check for an update every day so UPDATE MORE!

Alo! it is I! the one and only 'Anime Fan'...

ok ok... i must reply to Anon's review. firstly yes... it was a long chappie. actually the longest yet. and as regards to S&M... well, that's for me to know. muahaha.

Also, i profusely apoliogize about the 'disturbingness' that you may have found with in this chappie. but honestly, it turned out the best i think. honestly. a Goth Kagome having lovey dovey dreams didnt seem to fit.

Anyways... the next chappie will not be as disturbing. as well as the next lemon (which wont be for a bit). but i would honesly like to know if this recent chappie worried alot of you, and if so i will dim it down. not that i wish to, but i dont want to loose readers over something as trivial as a lemon scene. or do many of you think i should add another warning? just looking for feedback! (such as Anon's. feedback is really good!)

Ah well... thanks for the review ^_^. it always makes my day to see reviews! and to know what my readers are thinking. Arigato!

~Anime Fan~
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