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Outstanding crossover!!! Love it!

i sure hope this has a happy ending

Have I told you lately that you're a genius? If I havn't said it recently then let me say it again YOU'RE A FREAKING GENIUS! I can't believe how well you blend these different stories. I just love how you wrote Koga it all blends together so well my heart does cartwheels every time you post a new chapter. Poor Koga when he see's her again she's going to be wearing Kenshin's ring...uh I mean mark. Thank you for being the wonderfuly smart and talented writer you are and sharing your gift with us.^_^

When you get the chance you should probably go back & redo parts of chapter 1 [or 2, the 1 where Shippo goes to the well with Kenshin] to reflect what happens in later chapters & edit the travel time since Kenshin wasn't in Kyoto but Tokyo so it wouldn't take Shippo 3 days to get from the dojo to the well, probably take him half a day if that if he was running at top youkai speed most of the way since you said that the oni forest was a days ride by horse from the dojo in a later chapter. Also you have the gang seeing her off at the well after 2 months & in the latest chapter you have Kouga seeing her sneaking off for the well, etc after a month. Hope this helps & doesn't sound too nitpicky, it's just rather confusing when you read it & later something changes from how it was portrayed in an earlier chapter.

Very good & as always I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Neat idea having Kouga as Kenshin's old master. On this part I think doubled would be better as redoubled;

At first, she resisted and tried to push him away. So he doubled his efforts and a soft growl rumbled in his chest. After that, she literally melted against him, and for a few precious moments, Kouga knew what heaven was like.

Lone WOLF "claps" great great great. I rarely rarely read cross overs, because it's hard to take two excellent anime(like these) and combine them HOWEVER I am very glad I gave this one a chance this is great, Kouga for some reason I've always really liked so having him teach Ken was wonderful!!!! and how it all fits and has a very real hint of being believeable.

Now with that said, question maybe I have not seen the episode of something but WHY does every put Ayme(kagome's friend) with Kouga???? Could you email and tell me, or is this just an accepted pairing in Fic Land?

I remember back in another chapter you asked a question about hakamas, or Kensin's "skirt-thing pants." (LoL!) Hakama's are Japanese pants traditionaly worn by Kabuki performers, Samurai warriors, merchants and buisnessmen in ancient Japan. There were namy differnt types for formal occasions, working in the fields and horesback riding. I believe that the bottoms of th pants measure 42 inches in width, but they have wide pleats in them to make them appear smaller.

What the use of hakams was for merchants and buisnessmen, I have no bloody clue. The samurai however wore them because the wide legs and pleats were designed to disguise any movemen you were preparing to make.

Of course, since they're japanese, and they have a certain way of doing everything there are of course certain ways to fold and wear hakamas. And let me tell you, folding those things are a pain in the ass. (I never did get it right...)

Other than that, I like your story, good job!

ooh wow that was a totally awsome chapter, nver thought Koga would survive and now to know he taught Kenshin??? great merge I loved it, cant wait to see what happens next and what Kagome's daughter thinks once she goes back with her mom to the past, will she go? ooh I cant wait, please update soon, till then be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

write more soon please,

That was a great chapter! I loved how Rin and Shippo acted! It was so kawii! (I think that's how you spell cute in Japanese) Anyway, please update soon!