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I must be having a blond moment since all 3 errors are in the same sentence from the Yuki part, I was looking everywhere for it & couldn't find it;

“Woah, what’s with the hostility Higarushi? I only was only trying to commend you and give you some moral support.”

I already pointed out the 2 slight spelling goofs & since I finally comprehended the rest of the sentence instead of ignoring it I would take out the 1st only in the sentence & have it as I was only.

Hey, I've been meaning to review but just haven't gotten around to it. But I should let you know that I love your story. It's great to see a Ken/Kag story since there are so few that are any good out there. I think it is very reasonable that Kenshin is the way he is because he is a hanyou. I often kept looking at him in the anime and wondering if he really was or not....and with Shippo being his father, it just totally fits. But anyway, I do like your story and I hope you update soon. In case your'e interested, I'm going to be releasing my own Kag/Ken pairing in the near future although it'll probably be set up on fanfiction.net. Ja ne.

I liked the last chap! Must confess I hate the drug part at the end, that sucks, don't want Inu child to be that stupid even though she's really mad and confused right now.

Anyway, good writing and yes you pairings are your business and while people don't have to like them they don't have to read them either or should be mature enough to look and judge the story as a whole

I love how conflicted the emotions where in this chapter. I can sympathize easily with the both of them. The tension is great, I can't wait to see how they work through it. And now adding a potential drug issue into it with Kagome's daughter is only going to add more stress to the situation. Keep up the great work, please update soon.

Hmm this was a great chapter no such thing as merely filler its all important. I loved this chapter and of course the coffee part. ^_^ So this blood bond 'I wanna bone you' feeling goes both ways huh. Nice. Should make things interesting on breaking the ice. I like in chapter 10 how you had both Yuki's and Kenshin's POV in one chapter. I'm curious what his thoughts are as you said his smile seemed false and she was going to call him on it. This aspect of Kenshin is widely interpreted, some put his darker Battousai side as a quasi split personaly but I always wondered if the 'rurouni' personalty was what he wished he was or a mask and that the Battousai never actually changed per se except in that he quit his day job. In the OVA's even as the Battousai he is still a nice guy (to everyone he dosen't kill) He always plays cute but switches to serious so fast you gotta wonder how much is really going on in that head of his. I like that you've kept Kagome's spark, I mean sure she's older and more mature but she always was a firecracker even to Sesshamoru. Kenshin seems to have commitent issues as he was always threating to start wandering again and was dancing around how he felt about Karou for so long now he's roped into a pretty binding deal here with a stranger, I'm wondering how he's felling? Trapped? Maybe a little manipulated? Plus he was always a kinda shy guy even with Tomoe now that he knows his dreams are actually memories just how embarssed is he that he had wild doggie style sex with her (I think that was a new one to him) Or is he to shell shocked to be thinking about that right now? (you can tell what I'm thinking about 0_0) Now Shippo wants Kagome to travel down the well and start helping him kill Naraku/Kohaku how much of an issue is this going to be to Kenshin? He doesn't want to start taking heads again but I think for Kohaku he'll make an exception but how much is this going to bug him. I think Kagome is much better equipped to handle Battousai than Karou, not to dishonor her memory but she always seems to me like she doesn't want to see him as the Battousai even if its to save her life. Well this is what's running threw my mind at 2 am in the morning. I love that you updated this I'm totally in love with this story. Please keep'um coming:)

another great chapter, the guilt Kagome is feeling at the moment must be astounding. Good job on the Kenshin/Kag interaction, I'm lookingforward to seeing how their relationship developes. I'm sure it isn't going to be easy on either of them. Throw her daughter into the mix and wow. I look forward to reading the next chapters, please update soon.

hey I didnt think it was filler...I totally liked it...and when Kenshins eyes turned gold did that mean he was lusting after her??? hehe...that would be a real indicator to Kagome when he was feeling ummmm frisky, hehe anyhow totally awsome chapter I love it and what will her head strong daughter say to Kagome going back??? and what will happen when they do go back??? and Koga??? omg wondering whats about to hit da fan, oh and Sano and Yakiho???? what will they think about Kenshins new mate?? and his new knowledge of how he is half demon??? ooh I sooooooo cant wait hope you update soon, till then be safe well and happy much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

I loved that chapter! I love Kouga! Thanks for making this chapter! This story rocks and it seems that you know a lot about both shows, which is great. Most people, when they write crossovers, only know about one of the shows and a little about another show. I hope you continue this story! Please update as soon as possible!

Brilliant chapter 12! Forgot to review this earlier, so I'm doing it now.

I love that you made Kouga Kenshin's teacher and after looking at the picture from that link, I can Totally see it! I love Kouga's observation about the kid being almost as stubborn as the mutt ~ that was great!! Another point for my theory that Kenshin has InuYasha's soul.

I also liked Kouga turning into a huge wolf ~ you never see any of the wolves change like that, but it is logical that they can do it just like the Inu's can. Having him changing into a huge wolf and howling like that brought up the image from the 3rd InuYasha Movie at the beginning where InuTaisho, suffering from his mortal wounds, after he finished talking to Sesshoumaru, transforms into his huge Dog Demon form, howls and then flies off into the night. This is how I saw Kouga transforming ~ way wicked mental image!

Can't wait to see more!!

Just in case you're interested as far as I can tell Sesshoumaru's sword is spelled as either Toukijin or Tokijin.