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Finally I got to read it... And you are doing great. I can see that it's taking on epic proportions :)
Hope to see more from you soon.

Wonderful chapter! I believe that boy that the old man was talking about was the son of Sango and Miroku? Am I right? Anyway, I sitll don't know who the old miko is, I just can't figure it out. Oh and as I was writting that last sentence I had a thought, what happened to Kikyou? Since she is technically dead, would she still be around? That's been bothering me a little. Anyway, I can't wait for the Koga scenes! I love Koga! Kohaku is so evil! You made everything turn upside down and made everything that use to be right now left! I love what you are doing and I want you to update soon!

Wow you're really cranking them out way to go girl!!! Thank you so much for the physcial discriptions I had really pictured Yuki looking a lot different. I'm totaly for pairing up Yuki with Sano he's way cute and I know when I was 13 I was crushing big time for my 19 and 20 year old camp counslers. And that crack at Sano's hair was very funny. I liked Souta's reaction to Shippo and Kenshin, why does Souta's girlfriend's name sound familar....hey are you thinking of Escaflone? Is it a running joke that most people think that Kenshin was taller when they find out that he's the Battousai? If it isn't then it should be I find it rather amusing. Hmm this Higurashi Yasuo sounds very interesting I can't wait to meet him. And who's this old miko? I noticed that Kenshin made a mental note to ask his hosts about the rosary but hasn't yet and he hasn't tried to take it off either, is it still working? He dosen't need it the same way Inuyasha did but I can see a funny 'oro' coming out of this if Kagome acidentaly put the 'sit' on him. LOL. Why am I not suprized that Yuki's going to follow her mom down the well she probaly won't have a hard time of it with her dad's blood and sword. Kagome might want to start thinking up a new rosary for her head strong daughter. How's that for having a miko mom and you with youkia blood, I'll bet she can seal her in a shack too if she put her mind to it. This is really an amazing story I can't wait to see what the other side of the well brings for our hero's. ^_^
Oh and ps you need to insert a set of quote marks on 15 with (")So Kags, are you going to introduce me to your strange friends?" other than that its beautiful.

Very nice couple of chapters, looking forward to the next 1 & finding out what happens next.

good chap, I think that if YOU want to to the Sano romance do it! Your story, as long as you make it believable on how they come together I'm all for it. and technically in Sano's time, girls 13 were okay to look at, so that doesn't bother me.

Anyway can't wait to see where this is going, and as long as the writing and story line remain good I will enjoy the story.

THIS IS EXCELLENT!!!!! you should bring in Kirara!

Pairing Yuki up works for me, I'm sure that you'll work it into the story quite well. Poor Kenshin, growling at any male that comes into physical contact with Kagome. I wonder how that is going to work out when Kouga see's her again? I look forward to reading the next chapter, update soon please!

I hope Kagome remembers to bring some coffee and a french press with her otherwise she's going to have some wicked caffine withdrawl headaches. Man alive I can't tell you enough how much I just love this story to death. YOU ROCK!!!!! I'm worried for our hero's though they are seriously out-gunned. We've got 3 good swordsmen (Kenshin, Kouga and Shippo) but none of them have a weapon that can stand up to Toukijin. Yuki's can but she can barely make it transform let alone use the windscar and blacklash wave. I hope Totosai or his aprentice can put a rush order on some swords. Myouga knows about the well and I don't think Naraku ever knew about him so it shouldn't be too hard to bring him back but Kirara...maybe she's recovering at Midoroko's cave the one with the shield at the slayer's village. I hope Kenshin can manage some illusion because a lot of people are pretty pissed at him right now. There is one sentance I think would read better if you moved the comma "It wasn't something he blamed her for (instead of here) although, his rational mind knew that it was most likely a result of the 'bonding'." I don't mean to knit-pick and if this type of thing bothers you or puts your muse off in any way just let me know. I know muses are tricky things and I would never want to discourage yours in any way shape or form. I would like to request though that you add a little more physical discriptions such as "He watched her leave, sadly, before turning narrow (yellowed, amber or golden) eyes to the other occupant of the room." I figured since he was fighting the Battousai his eyes would be somewhat changed. I LOVE how you write with the emotional discriptions but small physcial ones a) help me picture the scene in my head and b) I'm not very familiar with the RK cast and I don't know what everyone looks like. I'm a little fuzzy on everyone's height as well. I figure Sano and Sesshomaru are about the same height, as Kagome comes to about Sesshoumaru's nipples and Kenshin dose the same with Sano. But Kouga's only like a head taller than her so he's not as tall as Sano. And if Kenshin can wear Kagome's sweatpants then they have to be about the same height too. But how much taller than Kagome is Yuki? And is Shippo the same height as Kenshin? You don't mention if anyone is tilting their heads to look up or down at someone else so this is all theory. Again I don't mean to knit-pick its just that this is such a good story I often drift off while rereading it to picture the senario in my mind. I love this to pieces and want to thank you so much for updating often I check this web site 4 times a day to see the new chapters added. I hope your thesis is going well. Thanks for the cookies they were yummy. ^_^ And please don't let that horse's ass dampen your enthusiam for your writting, its like you said it's your story you can do what ever you want and if he has a problem with that then he can just piss off.

I come back and find two chaptera! This story is sooooo good I love it! It is defintly well written and I love the conflict and everything about it! I can't wait to see what will happen once they go down the well and who they will run into. I can't wait to see Kouga and Kagome together and how Kenshin will react! Now that will be great. Sensai against student fighting over Kagome! Kouga wanted her as a mate, but Kenshin has her! That's going to be good! So please update soon!

Very good chapter, I noticed 3 errors so here they are & I hope this helps.

I saw 1 sentence in the Kagome/Kenshin or Shippo/Kenshin part that had only twice in the same sentence but now I can't find it, if you run across it I think only would be fine in either spot but not both, from what I remember.

“Woah, what’s with the hostility Higarushi? I only was only trying to commend you and give you some moral support.”

Whoa & Higarashi are misspelled in this sentence from the Yuki part at the end.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

About your 'rant' how can someone object to the pairings in Guardian when the last time I read it the pairings hadn't been decided yet beyond either Heie/Kagome or Kurama/Kagome? Personally I like K/K but since it's your fic you do what makes you happy & ignore the flamers. I've have weird little K/K 'reunion' scenes running through my head ever since I read chapter 2.