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CONGRADULATION!! This is my favorite crossover story to date. ( pause ) Ok, put the champagne down and start on the next chapter. Don't leave us hanging!!!

Excellent chapter! I loved it! Sorry I haven't been around, just busy with work. I love how your developing the story and all! Excellent with the rosarys. I bet Inuyasha was laughing at the misfourtoune of Shippo! He was propably saying "That's what you get for making Kagome sit me all those times!" I loved it! Please continue and update soon!

The genius of your writing is truly great I have to keep rereading the chapters to get all the subtle jems out of each one. I'm wondering who are they going to run into first when they come out of the well Sano or those wasps or both? Sano is willing to let Kenshin explain himself but I wonder how he's going to take all this. He muses that he would have no problem killing Kenshin himself if the slaughter was truly done by him but what part? I'm sure he'll forgive him about Kaoru and not blame him but how much will it bug him that Kenshin did kill the officers? I don't know his character very well but I think he would be willing to let it slide when he heard why. But Yahiko might be a different matter I think he's kinda scared of Kenshin right now. Also how much is it going to anger Sano that Kenshin 'hooked up' with someone else right away. Kenshin's flirting with Kagome is pretty obvious so he's going to pick up on it quickly. Will he be thinking that Kenshin's betraying Kaoru's memory? I loved the different POV's in the chapter that is a great way to get all the bases covered. And its a good thing you put that Inuyasha's fire rat is self adjusting other wise it would be to big for Kenshin.:) To bad about the costume change I like how his pink gi shows off more of his cute chest than Inuyahsa's haori. ^_^ Kenshin dosen't really know much of Kagome's history with Inuyasha (such as Kikio) and she knows nothing of Tomoe, even though right now they've got enought chemistry to kinda push aside such issues they are probaly going to want to talk about it as they get to know each other better. I noticed that Kenshin's demon seems a lot closer to the surface than Inuyasha's with his eyes turning yellow and red. I gather that those bandits Inuyasha killed were the first time he ever killed a human, but Kenshin had a lot more experiance in feeding his bloodlust. That his demon comes to the surface so quickly might pose a problem in a fight with out a sealing sword. If he does go 'full demon' again could Kagome calm him down again, his demon would reconize her as its mate. Inuyasha was worried that since he didn't remember anything that he would hurt Kagome but Kenshin's demon and her are well aquainted by now. ^_^ I really like how you title the chapters by the way :) Congrats on passing your 100th review I wouldn't worry to much about the slow down more likely I've noticed that new stories and chapters aren't being added as much this week and I think everyone's having an off week. I can't wait to see how this is going to go I'm fairly dancing up and down in antisapation.

*snickers as Shippo falls to the ground* lmao. Kagome is still quite clever, eh? Love that.
And I can't wait til Sesshou is released from his god-awful imprisonment and becomes healthy
once more--oh yeah, and bent out for revenge. THAT is what I'm looking forward to probably
the best, besides the lemon... oh yeh, and the destruction of all evil when Yuki comes into the
scene.

Until next time (which I hope is SOON *nudges author in the ribcage*),
-Jazz-

Real awesome fic. I am not a particular fan of InuYasha and I love reading fics of it. Especially if the fic has this quality.

*see's new chapter, jumps up and does a happy dance around the room* Oh thank you so much for your note at the end Sessha's very flattered and has now made it her new mission in life to double up on reivews to encourage our illustrious writter. ^_^ Man that part with the thoughts going though Kenshin's head when he's comforting Kagome was PERFECTION!!! I can't imagne a better understanding of his character. I like that you mentioned Shippo's bare fox feet I keep forgeting that about him. As the series goes on Shippo is definatly becoming more like Miroku, he had a his first love with one village girl with the fake shard and a flirtation with the other girl who had the mistaken Kirara, he even figured out what a good thing Inuyasha had going when he has Kagome clamping her legs around him for a ride when he copied his 'move'. LOL. Also when Miroku was mistaken for Hachi and he tries to have Shippo back him up he plays innocent but in his mind is like 'sorry dude' that just cracked me up. It makes sense that Shippo has a stock pile some where he always had a lot of possesions for a demon. When Inuyasha was shaking him out the first time for the jewel shards his pockets were crammed full of stuff. Poor Kenshin's turning green at the grave dust was amusing. I love how he gets all wary when he sees that mischievous glint in her eye its so cute. That he keeps stealing kisses from her is very sexy as well. I have a picture in my mind of Kenshin in a hot a heavy make out session with her with that miko's gi open to her navel, his waist length hair falling down and his thoughts on how 'sinful' a picture she makes in that getup when she's all breathless. Don't worry about the slow build up to THE LEMON I like a lot of presure and your smaller lemons and limes are very good. ^_^ She realy keeps him on his toes around her the sexy playfulness is great. I was picturing how his Shita would be different than an Osuwari and came up with what a soldier looks like when he hits the ground to avoid incoming fire. I've done it myself (my hubby's in the army) you hit the ground first with your chest with your hands close to your body and at your side, when you do this your face is only like an inch from the ground and the impact to your chest makes you grunt vs. an Osuwari where Inuyasha hits with his chin first and always eats dirt. This would mostly just shake up Kenshin and not really hurt him, unlike Shippo's head-banging, back-breaking, grass eating Osuwari. LOL yes very just revenge coming from beyond the grave for all of Shippo's tricks. Thank You so much for the quick update I'm shaking like a junkie for this story. ^_^

AWSOME

UR 100th REVEWER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG LOL KEEP IT ^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

16 and 17 were great! I like Sano, always did. Nothing wrong with flirting and I think the sex should wait for Ken/Kag for now, they have more important things on their minds.

The writing was good and I love seeing Shippo grown! Poor Sess...but he would have had to go down one day anyway.

Keep up the good work.

Hehehe that was priceless, Shippou apologizing at the end. I loved it. Another excellent chapter! Can't wait to read the next one.