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Great chap, i was waiting!, Love the intercation of Souta and the little INU, Also, please don't let people and their canon issues bother you, it's YOUR story, IF you wanted to make something up go ahead. That is why this is called FICTION. Your story, makes logical sense and as long as you make your story line fit together and make sense that is good enough for me.

Good writing!

Ok I'm in a cyber cafe in Texas on a 1200 road trip so I must make this breif I promise to leave a longer review when I get the time your work is so totally awesome! Love the set up this next battle should be interesting I can't wait to see how Kenshin reacts to Kagome in battle :) The whole Miroku groping his decendent thing was freaking funny. Kenshin's such a sweetie to her but she's still super-imposing Inuyasha over him I like this. It's like its her excuse to want him.

Good chapter, I enjoyed it immensely. Love the way you've brought Tsubaki in, and Kagome being Miroku's descendent was just too funny. Please update soon.

You cowrote History Lesson?! I loved that story!!!! Oh...sorry. Anyway, I loved this chapter!! It's ok, I totally understand about life and the muses...mine are not helping me for a particluar story (glares at Kuwabara, Hiei, and Naraku muses). Anyway, I loved it, and I can't wait for the next chapter. I bet Kagome's daughter will be coming soon...same with Kouga....can't wait!!! So please update soon!!!!

first of all YeaH!!!! you won I voted for ya love this fic hehe, now second how could ya leave it at such a cliffy???? argggghhhh I hate evil cliffies..grrrrrrrrrrrrrr but soo k I can wait since such a good fic and I have not power over it I have no say.........sigh anyhow you be3 well safe and happy and please please update ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija....:-)

great update!, Now I'm really excited about this story, yes Sess is to prideful that is how he probably let his guard down. Great job, looking forward to the next!

That was awsome and I can't wait until they all meet with each other! I wonder how Kagome will react to seeing Kilala. This is going to be interesting. Please update soon!

I see London, I see France, I see Kagome's.....BWUAHAHAHAHA! I loved that, this was quite funny. I couldn't agree with you more about Kenshin's sword I mean if you applied the whole Freudian thing to it, the way he grips it, the way it juts out from his hips.......drools...*shakes head* uh sorry what was I talking about:) Gods you're so right about Inuyasha's red fire rat haroi clashing with his hair but hey its your story let's try something. You put that the suit is self adjusting as it is tied to his youkai so put that not only will it adjust to fit the new youkai wearing it, it will change color as well to suit the new owner. After all his youkai energy is different than Inuyasha's. I'm thinking black with a white undershirt would look very striking but his orginal blue and grey is nice too. That thing is big on Inuyasha and goes over his hands, Kenshin's going to be swimming it it when he first tries it on. You could also make this as a part of his subconsious/youkai's wish to make his mate happy and not sad. She could walk in on Kenshin as he was just finishing tieing it in place (Ken will have to know before hand that this is her dead love's outfit) and she'd get all pained and teary at the sight of him and as his youkai bonds with the haroi to adjust to a new owner it will want to make him not look like her dead love so as to not cause her futher pain. And voila helping to keep Kenshin the glomp-worthy hottie he is.

yay you got an award you deserve it

you know i was just about to sugest you add some humor to lighten the mood a bit but i gues now i dont have to