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for The Sins of the Father

by whirleeq

person Jasmine Fields
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O god, I love this story. Read it through the second time this week (guilty of reading some
parts three times). After actually watching that OAV of Kenshin's end... After crying for an
hour or so (cuz it really is depressing) I decided that I like your ending mu-u-u-u-u-u-uch
better and am inclined to agree with your observations.

(Love to read angst; don't love to watch it so much. Go figure.) Anyway, I noticed you were
editing... and although I'm glad, I just wanted you to know that there are so many of us
that love this story and can hardly wait til you lead us on this adventure!!!

BTW, I don't know about a HUGE romance between Sano-Yuki, BUT, I think the kickin' ass
part could bring about major crushes and it might ease Sano's heart to hear about demon
existence coming from a *cute* *harmless* hanyou like herself. Plus, think of the jealousy
Sano will have when he discovers demon longevity? Oo Oo. Even better... when Yuki can
beat the *shiznit* out of something HE can't!!!!! Or at least wield Tesseiga in front of him;
the wonders of Tesseiga vs. the Reverseblade... You think he'll scratch his head?
person aleaha
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooohh more please soon, I can't stand it I just wanted to keep reading more and more. I've never, and really mean it, never read a good Inuyasha/Kenshin cross over. I love Yuki she comes across just like her father...I love that Shippo is subduded with the same word as Inuyasha. I love the drama between Kanshin and Kagome, and I'd have to say I'd much perfure a hanyou Kenshin that lives for centerys to the all to human end of the real character from the series...so anyway please oh muse visit this author soon, so I can read somemore in the middle of the night.

Kirara has two tails not three...thats all the nitpicking otakuness that you'll ever get out of me

Aleaha *Wants her cake and to eat it too* Sisson
Inuyasha tou Kenshin ga dai suki desu yo
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know I was thinking in that you seem to indicate the Yuki and Sano will have a 'flirtation' what Sano will think of Yuki's cute little dog ears. Kagome and her Mom (and lets face it pretty much all of us) are totally enamored of Inuyasha's cute little dog ears. But we've never seen cute ears like this on a girl hanyou I wonder if Sano or Yahiko will find them as irresitable as well. Yahiko seems to be taking the whole 'there are really such things as demons' in stride or maybe its just shock, I mean after burning bodies for a few days pointed ears and fangs aren't just that big of deal. Sano on the other hand seems to be having a harder time with the whole demon thing as he was tring to talk him self out of the fact that he just saw wasps the size of house cats flying overhead. I find his 'there's got to be a resonable explanation for this demons aren't real' squemish way of thinking to be quite amusing behavior in such a big strong loud mouthed guy. This should prove very interesting when he figures out what Yuki is. ^_^
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like how Shippo's paying for his big mouth now that Kagome can put the 'sit' on him Inuyasha is probally in heaven with a tally sheet ticking off each time HE got sat vs. Shippo's running total. I really like how you have Kagome mentaly compairing Kenshin to Inuyasha this is a pretty real thing to do and I like it. I'm wondering though how she'll handle the differences such as the ramen thing. She packed ramen for the trip and unfortunally on the road Kenshin won't be able to woo her with his mastery of the domestic arts. Kenshin's a good cook but the only thing you ever see Inuyasha make is that cold remedy and 15 year old Kagome couldn't cook either that's why the only thing she has in her pack is ramen, chips, soda and pocky. Now I like ramen but compared to real Japanese noodles I'm going noodles every time. I'm wondering how much Kenshin's going to like the ramen, compaired to real soup ramen is very salty. Of course if he didn't like it he'd never say anything but you can tell, and it would be interesting to see how Kagome would handle that. I hope your muse is in line again enjoy the spring! I'm going to try to not rub it in that its like in the 80's already here, which is nice now but come summer I'm going to pay.
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, I think you portrayed Kouga perfectly. Please update soon.
person KuwaLove
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cried!!! It was beautiful!!! I love Kouga and you did an excellent job with everything in this chapter!!! I LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY!!! Please update soon!!!
person deep serenity
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chap, and yes I think you did a good job at blending the two! wow can't wait for him to hook up with the group, lol but hell be a little pissed that Ken got Kagome!
person Jasmine Fields
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Love it! And I do think that you've blended and given enough explanation of
Kouga-Hiko... lots of explanations in this chapter -- and such a beautiful job at it too!!!
Can hardly wait til you update (hopefully it'll be faster than last time) and direct us into
some twists, turns and definite excitement! (And the look on Kouga's face when he sees
Kags again!)

-Jazz-
person Wing_Goddess
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter!! i just LOVE rurouni kenshin AND inuyasha and this is PERFECT. I enjoy this story so much i had to go out and hunt down the ruruoni kenshin OVA just so i could watch it. Excellent job with the hiko-kouga character!! please update soon!!!
person me
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great please update soon