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i luv ur story. i get tears just thinkin about it. please keep writing! i'm really interested in it.

Can I just say... *wow*? This has already caught my interest, and I can't wait for your next chapter! The love scene was so kawaii, but so sad... almost desperate even.

I like the idea of Kenshin/Kagome, specially an older kagome -- i just don't know how you are going to make it happen since both of them have quite a lot of baggage. Also, wouldn't Kagome be squicked by the idea of hooking up with Shippo's son? Just a thought...

OOOO I'm SOOOO flatered by your note at the end of the chapter thanks:) I knew great minds think alike fugue and the youkai and the exterminator are two of my favorite stories. I agree with Mija I'm wondering who killed Kaoru. At first I thought you were going to jump right in with the future story and kinda forget about the RK gang but this makes a lot more sense and does them justice. I would see how they would try to carry on the vengence of their loved ones, and maybe run into this bad guy of Shippos', I can see a parallel story thing kinda happening. One teny tiny thing though in chapter two you have the line "Shinta's half closed violet eyes flashed gold for just a moment" but in chapter three there was "His eyes were red, Sano, red--not gold, and he...he had claws" I was just wondering I know Kenshin's eyes flashing gold was because he's the reincarnation of Inuyasha but Kenshin's eyes are really violet and staying that way for the most part right? Sorry but its just I thought from the second line that I got the impression that his eyes were supposed to be gold that's why red was weird. Sorry it's just I love his violet eyes so much^_^ I want you to know you're doing great on this story and I'm really enjoying this very much:) I've never been a beta before (I had to ask my bother what a beta was) and my spelling not all that great but my grammar and punctuation are pretty good if I could help you out in anyway:)

oooh another wonderfull chapter, but did Kenshin kill Kauru like Sano thinks??? I myself think thats what drove him over the edge and turned him feral, someone else raped and killed her right??? right???? cant wait to see the scene with Kagome/Shippo/Kenshin...please update soon and your doing a great job with this crossover, as ive said Ive not read a Kenshin/Inuyasha crossover that I could actually get into but this one has me hooked..till next chap you be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

Well I have to say that I like it so far, even though not much has happened. Im still getting use to shippo grown up, and having kenshin in the scene, and all the RK people, but im sure that I will love the next chapters. You have earned me as a reader, and I will read, rate, and review your chapters from now on. Thank you for this nice fic, and continue to write at a reasonable pace.

nice 2nd chapter!! I cant wait until the next update!

great work, Im so loving this and I love the way this crossover is going, a bit more to my taste with a Kenshin/Inuyasha crossover, soo looking forward to the next chapter, hope to read it soon, till then keep up the great work be well safe and happy, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

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Sorry about the first one this is my first review on AFF. First of all GREAT story!!!! You are a wonderful writer this is one of the best crossovers I have ever read. To many are unbeliveable but this makes sense and I can really see it happening. I just love it.. I'm learning japanese from fanfiction. LOL So don't worry to much about the language. Now that you have set the stage for the back story I'm interested in knowing who's this enemy of Shippo's and what's going to happen in the future. This is a great story please keep it up I check this web site everyday for new updates on my favorite authors. I noticed you didn't have any authors on your favorite's list. Just to let you know this is one of the best ways I have found to find new good fanfiction. I usually find that if I love an author's work then I will usually also like what she or he likes to read. Anyway wonderful work:)

*nodnod* This definitely shows promise. Being obsessed with both Yasha and Kenshin, the summary caught my attention s traight away, and the prologue held it and further piqued my curiosity. :) I do hope you are able to update soon! I'll be on the lookout for future chapters :-D