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for The Sins of the Father

by whirleeq

person RichOnyx
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! I love lusty, lustful demons! And I love Kenshin! I really liked the chapter, so rest assured that you did a good job. Oh, and I really want to see how Sessy fits into all of this (oooh--maybe it's really Naraku taking Sessy's form!). Eagerly awaiting your next update!
person me
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uh oh what gonna happen to kenshin please update soon
person me
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon this is amazing
person Mija
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg im crying there is that fluffy huggs and happiness and missed you's and all that I was a waiting for, you did that soooo wonderfully I loved it, oh soo cant wait for more, wonderfull chapter...sniffles...update soon please??? huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Coffee Gyrl
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOO is that citrus I smell?:) Great chapter I love how you have Kenshin speak in the style of the anime, I always liked his speech patterns. This looks great I hope that you don't torture us with waiting to long for the next chapter. Keep up the good work ^_^
person RichOnyx
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooh, I hate you! That was so freakin' good! I love the crossover, and everything makes such wonderful sense. Damn you and your cliffies. Damn you! Damn you! Damn you!

Your loving reader...
person Marlingrl
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. Most crossovers I ignore because they're so preposterous, but the way you've set this one up is believeable. You've added good detail and I like your characterization. I'm looking forward to the next update.
person xoulblade
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes evil cliffie author!! LOL anyway update soon!!!
person DarkMystic
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thats really sad. >.> But still, its a good story, and I hope you keep writing more. I give you a good review for now, so keep up the good work. Im sure that everyone agrees with me when I say that you're a very good writer, and you will go places one day if you set your goals on it. *Bows respectfully.* Hope you update soon, cause im getting excited!!! Eeeep! *Runs around in a circle squealing excitedly like a little school girl.*
person Mija
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg that was such a warm and fuzzy chapter, short and sweet and I need MOREEEE please??? I want to see Kagome hug and cry and Shippo call her mother and all that fluffy wonderfull stuff...again great work loving this fic please update soon, if ya can email with an update, if not then will look back for another update till then be well safe and happy, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)