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for The Sins of the Father

by whirleeq

person Amanda
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Normally I am not one for crossovers but I really like your story. I can't wait for more!
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Having never watched Kenshin before I wasn't sure what to expect when I read this story (I'm noticing a trend here. I am anime clueless except for Inuyasha. But it was a choice between having cable or the internet. Internet won hands down as you see.) Needless to say I am axiously awaiting the next chapters for this story, it's quite intriguing. You're a great writer, keep up the good work and please update soon.
person Mija
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh wow what a wonderfull chapter, but why is this half breed hanyou, which can only be Naraku or one of his incarnates or child, why does he have Sesshy's markings and such??? or are they diffrent and just dont know it yet??? lol anyhow Im sure will get to find out soon but please oh please update soon love this fic, your doing a terrific job...update soon much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Diane
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very tastfully done for a rape scene. Looking forward to the next chapter whenever you manage to get it out. When I read this the 1st time Night Hanyou popped into my head when it came to Yuki, you can use it or not as you choose. It'll be interesting to see what happens when Kenshin meets Sess & when the villian is discussed & named. It couldn't be Naraku because they killed him but with the red eyes comments it really made me wonder.
person Zombie Hamster
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you story! Crossovers are so rarely done well, and it's nice to see a shining example of one. I do have one question, though--you mentioned in a previous chapter that you weren't going to demonize (no pun intended) Sesshoumaru. I can understand if you want to keep it a secret for plot purposes, but I was wondering who the evil villiany guy is. I would've guessed that he was Sesshoumaru because of they way you discribed him. Yet, he said he was a half breed. Is he of some relation? Some long lost son or mysterious second cousin, perhaps? I know I'm much too curious for my own good. >_<

Anyhey, keep up the good work!--ZH
person whirleeq(not logged in)
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Regarding the whole Sesshoumaru villian thing, it's a serious plot point as to why the 'bad guy' looks like sesshy. He's not the real sesshoumaru (just like he wasn't the real Kenshin) but a shape shifter with a serious grudge :). I thought I dropped some hints as to his identity. If it's not perfectly clear yet, it will be in the next couple of chapters. :)

--julie
person Coffee Gyrl
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update I was shaking like a heroin addict for this story I'm so freaking crazy for it. I hear you for the college 'homework' though at 28 I'm having the same problem. I thought that homework was so passe when you have to shell out 500 bucks to take the freaking class. Oh well thank you for the update I've got a chem test on Monday and this will give me something to look forward to^_^
person Arsenal
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about it. Hope your little boy gets better soon.
person ennui deMorte
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter 7! I love getting to listen from Kenshin's viewpoint to him waking up and his reactions to all the Western surroundings. And that is a TOTALLY EVIL cliffhanger!! And I so totally can't wait to see more :) !! Wonderful story and very original!
person Coffee Gyrl
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*does a happy dance around the room* You have no idea how freaking nuts I am for this story!!!!! My heart jumped in my chest when I saw that you had updated^_^ I'm completly crazy about this tale it is my very very favorite. I am curious though are you going to have Kenshin rember EVERYTHING?0_0 I ask because Inuyasha couldn't rember killing those bandits in his full youkia form so I am curious what you are going to have Kenshin rember. I'm so so so so happppppyyyyy that you updated! I've been daydreaming about this story at work today instead of doing what I was supposed to. *smacks back of hand 'bad coffee gyrl'* Oh well I'm also interested in Sesshomaru's deal because I don't think he'd let Rin's killer just walk away, you have created an amazing story, I truly can't predict how this is going to go! I would never presume to presure someone's muse but if you could find it in your heart to update soon that would be awesome!!!!!