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LOVE YOU LOVE YOU LOVE YOU!!!!!! Man you just keep getting better and better every chapter you write. I like the sexy flash backs I've always felt that they were a good way to keep lemons in without the whole thing sounding like a roman orgy. Through your favorites list I have discovered some great stories espically the Kenshin ones as I was not very savy with him before your story. Needless to say I'm now logging Kenshin's and Samurai X films in big time to get myself 'caught' up so to speak with the back story of Kenshin. Having said that I just wanted to state my very humble thoughts on the English vs. Japanese thing with the dialog. I like the random Japanese words and translations as I am unfamilar with this language however I prefer the 'that I do' to de gozaru and 'this unworthy one' to sessha, it just sounds more Shakespearian to me. *dodges quill pens thown by english lit majors and chop sticks by Japanese speakers* Ok ok I know this is a hot issue with some people and I'm not making any demands by any means. Its just that I truly like the more poetic old worldly way Kenshin sounds in English for those two phrases. Thank you for updating dear you really made my day with this chapter. I'm very interested to see how Koga's doing and what Kenshin's reaction to seeing Kagome's bite mark on her shoulder is as he will realize it wasn't a dream ^_^ This sexy tension is great:)

ooh another wonderfull chapter, sooo loved it, and I totally understand the Yuki outburst thingy, I mean wouldnt a teen be totally protective or thier mother when she mated with another person other than her father??? hey my kids that bad and hes going to be 18 and not once have I bought a man into his life that wasnt going to stay a part of it, sooooo its sad to say that my son has never seen me on a date or flirting with a man..lol...the first time was about two years ago, thought he was old enough to not wig out over some flirting and dating, hell if i wasnt wrong my son had a heart attack and threaten to castrate the guy I was seeing...to say we decided the drama wasnt worth and never saw each other again is an understatement..ok sorry for throwing personal crap in there, just trying to illustrate that I sooooo know what Yuki is feeling as well as what Kagome feels as well....it can be hard for both, changes in anyones world usually are..lol...but anyhow great chapter I love it and Yuki so reminds me of Inu, bad mouth and temper, he would of been proud, but he would of scuffed his baby girl if he had ever heard her talking to her mother that way...lol...and cant wait for the Shippo/Kenshin talk, sooo want to see how that goes...update soon and yes update your other story too, like that one as well..hehe...till laters be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija and good luck with your thesis...:-)

This is really getting deep... I like how so far you haven't left any gaping holes in your story. Everything you've mentioned has been brought back into play!

I feel bad about what you did to fluffy though... bad fanfiction author... how could you do that to poor wittle fluffykins?

Just kidding. Seriously though, really original idea on making Kohaku the bad guy. I mean, if you think about it, that kid had to be pretty f*cked up from everything, eh?

Donna

You've done such a wonderful job with this story. I really liked this chapter. You showed the mother/daughter tension really well. I'm looking forward to more Shippo/Kenshin interaction. I think it will be interesting to see how Kenshin reacts to Shippo. No worries on taking awhile to update. I'm in grad school as well and can totally relate! I'll look forward to the next update when you get to it.

another great chapter, you pegged Yuki perfectly I think. Exactly how I pictured any child from Inu/Kag. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see the next chapter

Liked the chapter & can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next. 1 correction though in the words used definition section Oni doesn't mean demon/demon ghost it means ogre. Yura of the Hair was an Oni as well as the blue giants that Sesshoumaru rides in on the first 2 times we see him in the series. Evidently Oni come in a wide range of forms.

Good job, I'm sad Yasha is dead but I do get tried of same old story line, so this is good.

Good writing style and can't wait to read more

bravo!, well done, it all makes sense how you blended the two anime, explains Ken abilities, that he is old but doesn't seem to age, his height and actully his face does kind of resemble shippo not to mention the hair! and shippo would have easily lived till Ken era!
Great job

wow, well scene was hot though I'm not sure I know or might like where your going with this,

Very good chap and will keep reading.

ooh another awsome chapter, damn I sound like a kid, but that chap was good, you totally threw me for a loop with the Kohaku thingy, i figured maybe a detachement or a child of Naraku but it being Kohaku??? brilliance didnt see that one comeing, anyhow great chap Im loving it more and more and cant wait for the next update, as well as an update to your new one with IY/YYH, I think thats the one, the one you just started??? anyhow great work, your a very talented writer and look foward to more, till then be well safe and happy much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)