rate_review Reviews

Goodness! You left off on such a cliffhanger the last time, and now it's only Kagome!
I'm not especially fond of her either, so I was missing Inuyasha and Koga a little bit. However, you did a superb job of portraying her as "not annoying". Kudos. Please update soon! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully it will be with Inuyasha and Koga, and the changing relationship, now that Koga has let Inuyasha into his den. :)

Continue!

That did seem to be a killer chapter to write. (Not that it didn't flow or anything, but just that I think I can understand how hard it is to write Kagome) I'm so glad you updated! So here's your poke with a stick! Please update again soon! And please update Koga and Inuyasha again soon! Great story!

WOAH.... i just found your story and read the whole evening till now.. just to find out that the last chapter ist only about kagome.. *cries..*
You writing style is amazing.. i love a good plot. : ) Excellent work, really. Dominance battle and pack behavior.. very, very interesting. ^^
But i must say, i'm more in tha Inu/Kouga storyline. (don't like kagome too gg)
Hope you update this fanfiction anytime soon. ^^ Put it in my bookmarks and will be looking for new chapters from time to time.

Julis

Alright! I haven't read the story yet (I'm printing it out and I'm going to read it at my leisure) but I expect the chapter will be awesome!
I do believe your writing habits are a lot like mine. A review will remind me that I have a story to write, and a good review will make me take a look at it and, more than likely, write a few pages.
Please accept my humble praises of this truly magnificent story. :)

Wow! I really love this, they're so in character and I find the whole demon ranking and instincts so wonderfully potrayed! Please keep writing!

Whoa... well, after finishing reading Ch 11, I think I just sat there for about 10 minutes solid. After waiting for a very long time (it felt like forever...) for an update on one of my all-time favorite stories... I don't know. LOL, I feel cheated somehow after that first rush of "OMG she updated!". As usual, you have a very smooth writing style, and your descriptions (and motivations) are great. I wasn't particularly in the mood for a Kagome/Mom sex talk, but hey... it has to happen sometime, right?

*grumble* I want to know how Kouga and Inuyasha are getting along...

Anyway, thank you for updating. It was an interesting chapter, even if it wasn't anything at all like I was expecting. Please, continue writing. =D I'll poke you with a stick for as long as you need me to.

~Cory

*Poke poke* Please update.

i come to poke the author with a stick *poke* this story really is great. its a vrey interesting idea i havent read one like this before and i thnk its great. ok im done babbling. but please continue *poke poke*

I believe that you did an excellent job with Kagome and her mother. I may not be
so free as to let my daughter travel 500 years away from me, somewhere that she
couldn't call me for help, but she is fifteen, knows about the birds and the bees,
and also knows that I will get her what she needs when the time comes. She knows
that she can talk to me, quite explicitely if she so chooses, and has. I believe that
Kagome's mother allows her daughter through the well because of duty. Japanese
are big on duty and honor. Kagome broke the jewel and it is her responsibility to
see that it is made whole.

I enjoyed the description of Kagome's visit with her friends. It was very amusing.

You've done a great job with the relationship between Inu and Kouga. I really
like the way you have built it around the baser instincts. It was too sweet that
Inu was hurt by Kouga's rejection and then Kouga let him into the den. I
normally wouldn't read something this violent, but you have done it in a way
that intrigues me.

Thanks for the great chappie. *pokes, pokes* LOL

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave