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Amazing fanfic. very true and believeable. keep up the good work. plz plz plz update soon

OMG!!!! This is the best story I have read in the longest time!! Your characters are so realistic. Please update quickly.

Fanfuckingtastic! I love it when authors incorporate the baser instincts that being a demon could have. It helps mark them as something Not Human. Greath job on the descriptions, everything was conveyed wonderfully without being blunt or overdramatic or cliche. That's a unique gift in this age of authors that barely know what a spellcheck or prereader are. Please continue to write, I would hate to see this work of art left unfinished like so many others. You don't by any means have to listen to me but part of constructive critizism is suggestions and sometimes requests. I would like to see more interaction with Shippou. He's by no means my favorite charachter but being one of the only other demons around it is a unique perspective. Also I feel that Sesshomaru showing up would be far too heavy handed. Please take these suggestions with a grain of salt, I'm trying not to come off like so many other rerviewers I see out there that insist they want this or that in a story and then lambast the author when they don't see it.

Keep up the good work,
a huge fan made in a few short min.

My very first reaction to this story was.. wow.. just wow.

Never had I read a fic so blatantly realistic and honest while being incredibly descriptive and gripping. I mean seriously the depth of the plot just pulls you in and I couldn't stop reading (Or hell even blink for that matter) until I finished the last chapter.
I could go on and on as to why this fic is perfect in essence from the speed of the plot to the fact that while this was a yaoi all the characters stayed undeniably true to their character in the anime/manga. I've read SO many stories where Inuyasha goes into rut to either run off and become somebody's mindless bitch or just be used as a hormonal excuse to form a PWP smutfest. (some of which were greatly enjoyed I will admit) But this is the first one I read that the plot drove the story far beyond the Heat and the sex. And I loved it

Beautifully done. This is going down as one of my favorites of all time I can't wait to see where the relationships of the characters go. And I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter Like I'm sure many others will be as well.


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Very interesting fanfic please write more soon

Amazing fanfic keep up the good work update soon

I enjoyed reading this story. update soon

I agree with every one. Keep writing!!!! I LOVE IT!!!

def interested in more good work keep at it

Good story, please update soon.