rate_review Reviews

I must say, your story is just incredible to read! I see alot of stories about Kogome going into heat and driving Inuyasha crazy, but Inuyasha going into rut? That's not done so often; in fact, this is the first I've seen it. Kudos to you for thinking of a plot that hasn't already been done to death! It's not just the plot that has captured me interest, because its delievery has kept me glued to my moniter. Really, I'm dying to see how this all turns out. Poor Inuyasha.... hehehe, or should I be saying poor Kouga?

The way Kouga and Inuyasha struggle with their demon and animal parts captures their phsyche in a way that is usually looked over for more smut (not that smut is bad!) and dialogue, and I must applaud your detailed use of the character's mindsets. There's just so many good things to say about this piece of fiction, so I really hope you update soon, so I could add more to the list!

I know a website that this fic seems to be perfect for: it's called Shinjitsu no Shi: Inuyasha Yaoi and Yuri, and is located at http://www.starless-dreamer.net/shinjitsu_no_shi.html . Even if you end up throwing some Inuyasha/Kogome het into the mix, I think it's slashy enough to apply. They don't seem to have any sort of problem at all with rape stories at this archive.

(BTW, thank you for making the character interactions REALISTIC and believeable).


Your local fanfiction whore,



~Azaelian

wow.. this story is very good.. so realistic.. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!

wow ur story is so awsome i hopr you update soon and do u know and good mpreg pairings cause i luv inuyasha and kouga pairings also kouga and sessho and inuyasha and miroku and sessho and miroku ;) im a huge mpeg and yaoi fan xD ur rock keep this story going

::Fans herself:: o..m..g..that was oh fucking wow that fic is sooooooooooooooooooooo good. pleeeeeeeeeeeeease finishe it soon.!!

I really can't get enough of this story. So well written and emotional. I am anxious for the rutting between Inu and Koga to become a little more sensual. I like the slow build up though. After all, Inu is raping Koga, nothing sensual about that, but then you showed the next time Inu took Koga that he was trying to consider Koga's reactions/feelings (am I making any sense?) and was upset that Koga couldn't relax. So I'm assuming that eventually this rutting will turn into something much more, even though they both love Kagome. Shit, I'm rambling again. I tend to do that when I follow a story that I love so much. Keep up the wonderful work.

I love this story. I totally like the way you portrayed Inu-Yasha when he turns into a full demon. Very realistic.

Wow. Didn't expect to find THIS from you, Lady D. I'm used to reading your Beast Wars humor stuff. XD Nonetheless.. Wow. Just, wow. *applauds!* Looking forward to more of this, I am. :3

Never stop writing, Lady D. X3

Wow!! Great story!! Please continue!!

man...I LOVE THIS FIC ITS THA BEST EVER AND me BELIVE I READ LOTS FANFICTION..YUP YUP GOOD WORK!!!DON'T EVER STOP THIS FIC OR I WILL BE FOREVER SAD AND WHANT TO DIE....T_T...love it!!!!!!!

nice keep up the good work

Alpha_Inu