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for Instinct

by DementedAngel

person FoxOfNineTails
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It has a plot!!!!!Wow, great work keep it up!!!I am looking forward to reading more!
person Lynx
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is wild and I love it!
person YEHUDIS
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn inuyasha is very uhh vicious and but damn you wrote so the thing with inuyasha annd koga fighting and inuyasha got his ribcage wow koga didnt even know for abit and damn inuyasha ruff
person Cat Lynx
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I realy realy liked this story and would like to see what happens, does Inuyasha find him gone? does he reach his pack in time..alll the goody questions and the improtant one, what does Kagome think?

PLEASE CONTINUE
person GreenLady
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. I'll admit, at first I had reservations about reading this, because so *few* rut stories are written well, but this was. Your pace is amazing, and I appreciate that you don't forget the animosity between Inuyasha and Kouga. And well a lot of the rape scene made me cringe, it was handled with a sensitiveness that made me hope for a (and I'm going to sound cliche) brighter future for them. Kouga's reactions and Inuyasha's instincts are truly well done, and there's something fascinating about Inuyasha's lack of control. I'm really hoping you'll continue this? *I'll* definitly be checking for updates!
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update. now. please?
person Qem
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot hot hot. Addictive.Dying to find out what happens next with when Kouga meets up with his pack... An when... Inuyasha... meets up with ... Kouga... again....

Ah dear Kagome, the things your loves do for you...

Loved the wolf instinct touches you gave to add insight!
person Kuiya
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello again! I decided to go ahead and read your story. Now that picture up on the IY Yaoi/Yuri site makes sense! Ha! Well, at least we know you're not just randomly drawing pictures of naked Inu looking like he just glomped Kouga in the middle of the night in the woods! Anyway, I love the story so far! You're a really great author as well as a great aritst. I really admire how you know exactly what you're talking about and explain in detail why there's a certain thought or action taken. Meh... I wish I could write AND draw like you do! Heh, anyway... I really hope you continue ASAP! I'll check up on it once in a while.

Learn my name by heart...
Write your prayers in blood...
~Kuiya Ukameya
person Vapid B.
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Deep fic I think you do well in getting into their thoughts and expressing them. Inu Yasha has a lot to deal with when he gets over this 'rut'. Kouga has a lot to realize and I look forward to the chapter when he does. Good job and good luck.
person Golden
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really really really like this story. Keep it up you are doing WONDERFUL! ^___^ Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!