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man its about damn time you updated this thing. I love this so much and you havent updated in forever. Please keep it going, its too good to forget about. Oh and if it is at all possible, could you e-mail me when you update.
Thanx

MeLaiya

I quite enjoy this story. I love the way that you delve into canine psychology and give explanation to the events that are occurring. Chapter 5 was a bit of a baffle to me, but I can wait until the plot has unfolded to see its relevance. I applaud this story--it's well-written and well thought-out, which is a rarity for some fanfiction. I breathlessly await your continuation, and to answer your question about other sites, there is a new site at www.roundgalaxies.com that is being created. I know the admins and they are putting some finishing touches up on the site, but your story would be a very welcome addition there. You can also upload fanmusic and fanart (at least I know they're working on that). Anyway, KUDOS! Please update soon!

I'm glad that you are continuing this story. It's very well written and keeps the reader interested and wanting more (as I do)! Just to let you know, Brightdreamer, an author here, has a website that is dedicated to Kouga. Whe also has a story, Solace, that is well-written and features the Inuyasha/Kouga pairing. She might be interested in hosting your story. Her website is www.rabidkougafangirls.com. Good luck!

Hot damn! And here I thought it was over or moved to another site! That was great! Thanks so much for continuing your story it rocks and I'm glad it's not over! Great chapter, I like how you write all the pack dynamics. Poor Kouga, although I agree with you about how well he can pull off all the desparate shame and angst, this role you've written for him is really cool, it's self sacrificing and let's not forget that that trait is part of Kouga's character in the series. Awesome chapter, and awesome story, please update again soon!

Awesome writing, awesome story. Love the rough Inu and the defeated Kouga. Keep going.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

This is an awesome first chapter! It's a powerful portrayal of Inuyasha trying to keep himself under control. It's evident how much he loves Kagome that her happiness is more important to him than his own gratification even when e's in such a primal state..

This second chapter is magnificent! A very convincing job of Kouga! A bit slow on the uptake, full of confidence and bravado even as he's taken down and accepting the situation without giving in. That's the Kouga we all know and love!

Another fantastic chapter! I love the dynamic character mixture in Inuyasha. The demon/hnayou/human flows from animal to coherence, from lust to bloodlust and back again, so convincingly, as are Kouga's reactions driven by his own instincts.

Chapter four - Kouga dealing with the aftermath. Still the leader of his pack putting their protection first. Loyalty I think has always been Kouga's strongest character trait and you demonstrate that. As for humour, I have to agree with you - life is a myriad of thoughts and emotions swirling together by not keeping the story totally in one emotional state makes it all the more believable and three-dimentional.

Chapter 5 is very intriguing. Very poetic. It will be interesting to see how the whole story comes together. I don't know how often you update (a fic this great has to take serious time) but I'd appreciate you e-mailing me when you do.