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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You rock. I bow down to you~ -bows down- See? ^.^ Keep writing, this story is awesome. It actually has plot AND sex, and good plot and good sex at that. ^.^ ^.^ o.o ^.^ !!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice chapter. i really love everything that you have so far. i love the explainations that you come up with for everything. i also love the way you explore the dynamics of Inuyasha's mind--very interesting and plausible ideas you have there. and don't worry about the exposition, i didn't think it was slowing down the fic any--i just thought that you were doing a great job expounding on your plot. keep up the good work.
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sensationnal fic, although inu/mir is my favorite couple. (hey why don't u make it a 3some) . Anyway i just love ur style and you are absoutely right in taking everythinsg slowly and clearly. Keep up the excellent work. Courage.
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WowO_O This fick is fun-fucking-tastic!!! If someones says it's too long, don't listen to them! It's like it should be^^
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Please update again soon! I love this story! (it's definitely not to long for me, I'm happy as long as there are updates!) I think Inuyasha and Kouga are very well written and it was neat to see a slice of Inuyasha's mindset in this chapter! Post again soon! Great work!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aah man, this was way too short. I love this, Im on the edge of my rolly chair the whole time. Please hurry and update, cant wait for the next chapter. Oh and please let me know when you update. Thanx. Keep up the good work
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm. i'm wondering. is this going to turn into a romance thing between inuyasha and kouga? because so far all i see is inuyasha raping kouga. (i'm not critizizing btw, i still like the scenes and this is one of a few that is very on character. :P) but yea, just wondering if inuyasha is going to fall for kouga-chan and S T O P lusting after kagome. >><<
great chappy btw, can't wait for the next one. and KUDOS for POSSESSEIVE SEME INUYASHA! OHOHOHOH! smutt in the next chappy please! :P and i wonder if that other wolf girl (forgot her name) is gonna make an appearance...so that inuyasha's INNER DEMON could feel threaten and get jealous! ohohoh!
great chappy btw, can't wait for the next one. and KUDOS for POSSESSEIVE SEME INUYASHA! OHOHOHOH! smutt in the next chappy please! :P and i wonder if that other wolf girl (forgot her name) is gonna make an appearance...so that inuyasha's INNER DEMON could feel threaten and get jealous! ohohoh!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm. i'm wondering. is this going to turn into a romance thing between inuyasha and kouga? because so far all i see is inuyasha raping kouga. (i'm not critizizing btw, i still like the scenes and this is one of a few that is very on character. :P) but yea, just wondering if inuyasha is going to fall for kouga-chan and S T O P lusting after kagome. >><<
great chappy btw, can't wait for the next one. and KUDOS for POSSESSEIVE SEME INUYASHA! OHOHOHOH! smutt in the next chappy please! :P and i wonder if that other wolf girl (forgot her name) is gonna make an appearance...so that inuyasha's INNER DEMON could feel threaten and get jealous! ohohoh!
great chappy btw, can't wait for the next one. and KUDOS for POSSESSEIVE SEME INUYASHA! OHOHOHOH! smutt in the next chappy please! :P and i wonder if that other wolf girl (forgot her name) is gonna make an appearance...so that inuyasha's INNER DEMON could feel threaten and get jealous! ohohoh!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chappy btw, can't wait for the next one. and KUDOS for POSSESSEIVE SEME INUYASHA! OHOHOHOH! smutt in the next chappy please! :P and i wonder if that other wolf girl (forgot her name) is gonna make an appearance...so that inuyasha's INNER DEMON could feel threaten and get jealous! ohohoh!
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is the first fanfic I've read that goes in depth into the reasoning and emotions behind the pack mentality. I am in awe!! You write extremely well, and I'm really really looking forward to the next chapter to see how the plot develops. Don't get me wrong, I can enjoy a PWP with the best of 'em, but the sheer descriptive detail and mental anguish in this fic has me hooked!! Keep up the good work.