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by DementedAngel

person ahanchan
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I think it was a really good ending point!! Please update again soon! I liked the Kanna chapter!
person ~Fluffy~
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoW! That was soo funny and good! I want more. I lvoed the ending...Kouga throwing him out of the den...That was cute! I like this paring and it's good to see Kouga being the uke instead of Inu. that's a refreshing change. ^_^ Update soon!
person ChaoticSpecter
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic. You write it so well, your descriptions are on point and do a very good job of conveying the emotional turmoil that Kouga and Inuyasha are feeling. I also really liked the chapter you wrote about Kanna. I've always thought that she was an interesting character, but this is the first time that I have seen anything with her written so well. I like your exploration of her character.; everything is very plausible and very interesting. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Update whenever you get the time.
person Rawben
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
angst is all well and good, but there will be a happy ending right? cause really, that's all that matters to me. actually, dont answer that. b/c if it's a sad ending, then i'll stop reading. i hate it when they end sad... :(
person Rawben
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh. and yeah. great chapter. ;) i really liked it! lol! and i love that kouga's fightin it! lol! "*i dont want...but ohhhh...*" that's just hilarious. ;)
person Rawben
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhhh. So. Good. i love this fic! it's ... just great! but i hope that kouga doesnt get the hell knocked out of him again! :( dont you think he's endured enough? poor thing. i like how in the last kog/inu lemon he yelped! ha! cracked me up! i hope he has a pleasant lemon soon!
and i liked ch 5, but i didn't get it till i read the AN at the bottom... *blush*...
person Dante
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Glad to see that this story is continuing, personally I'm kinda tired of Kouga being the dominant one. Go Inuyasha!!

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person Anon
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Run Kouga, run!! Not that it mattters, because he's going to tired eventually and Inu-chan will catch him. I just hope he doesn't hurt him too bad. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person yako
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_________________^Goooooood!
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome story. i really did think that the chapter with miroku/sango and naraku/kikyo was great but it could have been posted up as a one shot, it kinda disrupted the flow of the story... Your dialog is great. i have never read a coupling between inuyasha and kouga that i ever thought plausable before, but this one has exceeded expectations. Wonderful.