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man i love this, never ever stop writing and please update soon.

no! it's not hard to read! in fact, it's too short! ha! dont stop! too many have quit! i cant lose another fic to disinterest! :( lol... yeah, ok, so i like to over react... shut up.
i love this fic a bit too much. it's borderlining obsession really. i'm concerned. but you know what they say, starve a cold, feed an obsession... at least i think thats how it goes... yeah.
so... yey! and update soon! this is just too good...

WOW! That was soo good....I feel slightly sorry for Kouga. Then again, i'd feel sorry for anyone in his possition, even if it was naraku. Oo'' Ok maybe not Naraku. But you get the point. Nice chapter...I like them, long. ^_^

Update soon!

Hi

Just a quick note. You are doing an excellent job of looking at the inter relationship between Kouga and Inuyasha. You seem to have their characters down pat. As you said the story seems to have a mind of its own. Just follow your muse, it is not leading you astray.

I enjoy stories that give hints of different endings. It is good to ask the question, so where is this leading. Will they end together or go their separate ways. Yes, they could mate. However, is it not their duty as the alpa to perpetuate the species? This is what I enjoy about the story. I cannot write worth ditty (a lack of patience) and I admire people who can. I can never develop plot which you are very good at. I look forward to more installments.

Tarn

i like the tension between the two... i hope it becomes sexual tension

Wow! I'm *almost* speechless. I love this story, and the way you write is fantastic. It's so descriptive! I also love reading all the motivations behind the actions of both Kouga and Inuyasha. Thank you for writing such a realistic, definitely in character, captivating story. I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter! (And I love the chapter about Kanna... somehow I never considered her before as much of a character and you brought her abruptly into my contemplations.) Please keep up the wonderful writing.

haha, I like this new chapter; especially the ending. Keep up the good work.

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This story truly rocks!!! Please continue!!!!

Awww... I'm gonna be sad when it ends and they leave eachother. ;___;

I love the story though. ^^ Dominant instincts have always been my favorites in stories. They're hawt. ^___- Update soonz?

This really is some of the best writing I've read in a long time. I absolutely love the whole basic dog insticts that Inu is displaying. It all sounds extremely plausible and true to what would actually happen in the wild with real rutting animals. Did you do some reasearch into animals mating in the wild and pack instincts regarding alpha and beta, especially within the dog and wolf kingdom? Anyway, Koga kicking Inu out of his own den was priceless. I just had to laugh my ass off. Also, Koga's musings are so funny and/or heartfelt. You've really done a brilliant job with this fic. I was so happy to see that you updated finally. But, talented writing like this takes time, especially when you have other things going on like, I don't know, A LIFE! lol. Good luck with the next chapter. I'll certainly be looking forward to it. ^_^