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for Instinct

by DementedAngel

person leeann
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon.
person cory
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it is so realistic and it keeps your attention. Please put a disclaimer on it, I wouldn't want this story to be deleted!! I am really looking forward to the next chapter... please keep writing! thank you
person Sadisticxwh0r3 (is to lazy to log in)
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I am amazed with this story; it has literally taken my breath away. The work that you've put into this story is absolutely unbelievable. I love the plot, and the characters are wonderfully written out. Kougas’ tail is so cute, and Inuyasha. Well he's fucking awesome. ^. ^. I'm so glad that this story is being written. It’s one of the best stories that I have read on this site and others so far. I guess I should be thanking you, for your wonderful ideas and work. I hope there is more soon! Can't wait to read the next amazing chapter. Bye.
person smilley
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS GREA I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
person Dorian
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm simply astonished!! I love this story, and I am eager to read more!! You are a fantastic writer, and the description of the pack instinct is superb!! Please continue with all my humble gratitude. Thank you.
person C-chan
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, I love that you are keeping them both in character and not making them all lovey dovey as soon as they meet; and I agree, can't make appoligizing too easy on Kouga, he'll just get cocky again. I love the story and can't wait for your next update, I know it won't dissapoint. :)
person syd
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHH! kouga's tail is adorable! great chapter! i hope you update soon! one of my friends actually reccommended this to me, and i agree! it's great!
person RedHerring
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The sex is hot, the emotional turmoil is entertaining, and the plot is interesting. I always love reading stories when Inuyasha goes all primal and instictual. The fact that this is Koga/Inuyasha just makes it all the better! Please update soon, and keep up the good work!
PS- Do you have a mailing list for updates on this story? Please let me know. :)
person Unanonymous
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. The way you portray Inuyasha is a nice change from all the stories assuming that he would be the bitch, stumbling aroud somewhere getting raped. Pfuh. And Kouga too. It's very realistic and well-written. I can't wait to read the next part!!!
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Just found your story, got to say it blew me away. The detail, the intensity, the hidden thoughts. Really liking it. Hope you decide to continue it.

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